Brilliant. I enjoyed it very much. Your liberal use of ellipses invokes a clear sense of anxiety and frustration. Nice job!

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Natalie - you have a wonderful blog of work. So much in such a short time. Very good poetry.

I'm sure sometimes in our life we have all wanted to get things right, not offend and then 'sit on the fence'. I can't really see you with this monologue... a politician maybe...
(I just get a vision of Tony Blair when I read this) ;)

'God knows I try' is also a little marvel.
Great works.

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Haha this is great! Everyone has had a conversation like this, right? Feelings...hesitations...misunderstandings...and some of it while on the toilet no doubt ;) By the way, thanks for your comments on "Write Your Own Lines" and "Don't Put Me in Your Box".

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