I liked this. For all the reasons the others have given.
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Lillian
Tue 22nd Apr 2014 20:37
Your imagery was incredible and the way you talk about darkness in a light mood is very impressive. I quite enjoyed your poem.
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Imagery and lines to get the mind working overtime.
Haunting and stimulating in equal measure - with
its invitation to interpret lingering in the final stanza.
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Thu 24th Apr 2014 22:51
lovely piece David.x
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