Great idea for a poem! And when you perform it you're gonna HAVE to do it in a Salford drawl ;D
I've nowt against him doing that ad btw, it's up to bloody him innit?
Anyway, thought the repetition of Johnny Clarke very effective, and you didn't do the predictable thing of incorporating loads of his lines in your own poem.
Nice tribute.
Bloody hell Ray!! Did ya?! Woooo!!! You can still be working class and like nice wine and cake you know. Ahem.
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thanks ray - amended for accuracy following your knowledgeable comment :-)
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Dave Bradley
Wed 2nd Oct 2013 13:34
Enjoyed this Ian. Particularly liked 'raging zeitgeist troubadour'.
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