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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 13th Apr 2013 16:12

You are always worth reading - easy to follow with a cogent point to make.

Why not take out the 'Or' before 'If you're black or white or red'. IMO, it's a trip-up and really not needed.

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Sat 6th Apr 2013 10:32

More handouts? - Bah, humbug! - but really it's very good, ta muchly, nick.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 2nd Apr 2013 16:09

I like the spoof on a famous poem. Neat.
JC's comments reminded me of s similar feeling
when seeing family in my South Devon birthplace,
only this time they all seemed to be from Liverpool!!

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Harry O'Neill

Tue 2nd Apr 2013 14:35


Yvonne,
you`re just jealous of the Huhnes,
aren`t you?

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John Coopey

Mon 1st Apr 2013 23:04

I must say, Y, whenever I get the train back to Doncaster from London I seem to get in a carriageful of people visiting friends and relatives in one of Doncaster's prisons.

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