nice sonnet,
Liked the human/landscape reflectivity of the two sections (how the last six lines `answer` the first eight)
Particularly liked:
`The knife of age has cut into my face` and the use and position of the word `yet`.
Knowledgeable use of the sonnet form.
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tony sheridan
Fri 1st Mar 2013 18:40
Beautiful. The last three lines! Well done! Take care, Tony.
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Dave Bradley
Sat 2nd Mar 2013 19:31
Harry's said it for me. Nice one, Ian.
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