Love this! Nice one. Take care ,Tony.

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And are'nt your arms aching Dave-
holding that book up all this time?
Haha tee-hee and terrar.xx

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Heres two easily pleased old duffers
saying(typing)nice one Dunn's lad.xx

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Thanks for commenting Anthony - I've yet to record the audio and that is often the time when editing occurs, so I may yet return and tweak this if I find it helps. :) Best wishes, Dave

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Hi Dave,

I really liked the idea/sentiments in this piece. The rhythm/meter is a little lumpy in places and I think it would be improved greatly if you sorted that out - it wouldn't take much. But hey, it's your piece, and, if you're happy with it . . .

Regards,
A.E.

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