Thanks to Mike, Pat & Stefan for your kind comments - glad you enjoyed this one. :) Best wishes, Dave

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A really good read Dave, very clever poem.


Mike

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Brill poem.
Brill reading.
Brill beard!

Take care Monsignor!

P&S.xx

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Thanks MC & Larisa, the feedback on this poem has surprised me somewhat, but I am naturally pleased that it has 'struck a chord'. :)

Best wishes, Dave

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Right on! On a number of occasions I've dreamt of a song and woken with it in my mind, scrabbling around for my portable tape recorder to hum the tune into the mike so as not to lose it. How quickly these things fade otherwise. I know even Sir Paul McCartney has had the same experience and it is a validation of the creative spirit at work even when its owner may be asleep.

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Dave! I can't really wait to express myself as ...I think this is your best poem. The very best!

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Thank you all for your comments, glad these lines came across well. :) Best wishes, Dave

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Excellent idea to exorcise fears by writing them down.

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Loved the rhyme, rythmn, imagery and perspective. A clever piece indeed.

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Hello Dave. Very powerful poem. Nice imagery.
This sounds a bit like my life.
Very good poem

Shirley

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