hi thanx for comments. its an old 1 from the late 90s. yes i may redo it Andy sometime in the future.

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I enjoyed this read.I was going in a different direction with my interpretation until I read the final Stanza. My naivity led me towards the literal as to the metaphorical tunnel. A good graphic piece of emotional turmoil.

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i like this, but am wondering whether you should remove 'over end down the black nothingness of the tunnel' as you mention tunnel again in the third stanza and also whether the ends in succession work.

but i did enjoy this... A

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