Thanks Tony, very much appreciated

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I like this. Nice one!! Take care, Tony.

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Thanks Graham

Actually the 2 buts were an error, the first one wasn't supposed to be there so yes totally agree with you on that one, I have now edited. I quite like the use of hopelessly twice though as I feel the last line is more of a repitition of the previous. Constructive criticism always welcome though so thanks for your honesty.

Matt

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I liked the idea of this Matt. It would be improved (IMO) by not repeating the "but" and the "hopelessly".
Well done. Graham

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Thanks Winston

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Hi again, Slips his niche, liked that

Winston

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