I love your thought processes Alan - though life might be easier for you and many other poets if you didn't have them. I occasionally wonder whether intelligence is a curse - being able to really think about your condition rather than just get on with satisfying your basic needs...
You describe disconnectedness/ disconnection (neither sound great) very well and your poem made me think, which I like to do :)
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Ann Foxglove
Fri 29th Apr 2011 07:29
Tis true - I spend most of my time alone, and I love it. But, sometimes I suddenly feel ALONE and that it totally different, a very cold and empty feeling. I find the scientific take on the subject very interesting in your poem, about atoms and energy etc., making it sound as if we are all alien from each other and even maybe from ourselves.
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