thanks for the comment, katy lisa.. is a bit of a odd piece this one, must admit and i agree with you - it's certainly a spooky one x

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very erie and spooky making the hairs on your back stand on end

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thanks to all for comments here... quite a straight forward poem for me to write, but has given me plenty to think about afterwards.. x

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Shadows were lost
across trenches
treasuring the sun

I love this part it conjures a beautiful image.

:)

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Hi Andy, an interesting one this. liked the penultimate section.(an hill?)Win x

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I like this Andy. You choose some unusual images, I esp like the first verse (where can those horses be going?) :)

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Hi Cynthia - there was a typo on the last line where servants should have been said instead of the second shadows.. must have been more tired than i originally realised when i blogged it before.. oops... hope you are good x

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Many, many fine images and whole lines here, Andy. Your opening stanza is a striking thought-catcher. IMO, I might leave off the last two lines, or perhaps rearrange them, leaving only two words 'like shadows' as the ending. I'm glad you acknowledged A W's poem.

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