I couldn't begin to say how much I've enjoyed reading this! Especially loved ,"It's why we're drinking away sores,and rioting in hammered,high street,small scale wars".

Got goosebumps when I got to that bit!Fabulous,and socially relevant for this time!

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A wonderful narrative - well done!
"Marooned harmony" doesn't work though "harmonise with those silent screams" ...maybe.
Any way it's a wonderful sinewy rope of visions.
sTEVE smITH

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I really like this - reminds me of earlier Irvine Welsh writing. Love the 'cultural' [;)] references, the almost-dirty realism, can see Ivor Pie and his ilk, and I do love a nice bit of sneering contempt now and again :D

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