Fit to formula stuff really: create a cynical world of drudgery in a peculiarly engaging and beautiful way and have fun bashing its cheeky face in til its own mother wouldn't recognise it.

I probably ought to start selling these things as kits together with self-assembly instructions.

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Dermot - I really do try not to critique, but for me, the first 17 lines were totally masterful - superb - & after that it all seemed to go off the rails - but apologies if that's what you intended. If I'd written the first 17, I'd be very very pleased with myself. just my 2 cents. all the best. B

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Reminded me of Men are from Mars - very well put together and entertaining not to mention skilful
thought the metaphors were great - favs were 'so shu’ up, she said' and 'laughing of the stream'

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