Good morning Larisa-your loving nature has again come to the fore in this poem-that is its overall quality-best of luck to you in the competition-thanks love-Stefan-xx

Comment is about Love of the Stars ( Space) (blog)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

Oh, forgot to tell you. Why should you take it seriously? I certainly wrote it deliberately.

Comment is about Love of the Stars ( Space) (blog)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

I wrote this poem long time ago. But... now I've changed a lot of verses here for the contest. If you have a look at my blog entries you will see this poem. It is a bit different.

Comment is about Love of the Stars ( Space) (blog)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

Hi Larisa, thank you for your comment. I like the romantic angle you have posed in this verse, but I think that the way you have written it is in a juvenile form. (bit like much of my poetry really). The romantic content is nice, but I can't help but not take it seriously. I am wondering whether you did this deliberately? It is nevertheless, a poem that would catch the imaginations of many readers.

Stay well

much love

mike

Comment is about Love of the Stars ( Space) (blog)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska