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Stephen Gospage

Thu 11th Sep 2025 16:59

Thank you for the kind comment, Rolph. Yes, it's certainly on the same lines!

Thanks for introducing me to this.

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Rolph David

Wed 10th Sep 2025 17:38

Oh Stephen, what a marvellous poem.
Your poem reminds me of a song from my childhood, sung in Ruhrpott slang by Tana Schanzara… so delightful… here is the translation, and if you want to treat yourself to the song, here’s the link to listen, too.

https://lyricstranslate.com/de/tana-schanzara-vatter-aufstehn-lyrics.html

Father!
Father, get up!
Father, will you finally get up now?
Get up! My God, every damn morning the same show!

Father, you’re supposed to get up now! Damn it!

TV till the middle of the night and in the morning you won’t get out of bed!
Get up right now, or you’ll be sorry!
Father, you’re gonna be late for work!

Father, I’m telling you this for the very last time!
Get up or something will happen!
Father! Father! — A shot!

Well then, Father, now you can stay in bed.


Regards,
Rolph

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 10th Sep 2025 13:13

Thank you, Graham and Greg, and thanks to everyone who liked this.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 9th Sep 2025 10:40

Hahaha!! Many a true word Stephen.

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Greg Freeman

Tue 9th Sep 2025 08:24

Excellent, Steve, and very true.

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