Rolph, I truly loved every line you wrote, but the one that struck me the most was, "But night unveiled what day disguised." The way you conveyed that message felt so delicate yet powerful! I really admire it.
As for the final lines, "For what endures, through age and pain, / Is love that's honest, raw, and plain."—I do believe in that, truly. But in this day and age, I must admit, I still have my doubts. Even so… I hope I get to find one.

And @Uilleam, your comment felt like a short poem in itself—the satirical tone is wonderfully clever. It instantly reminded me of one of my earlier poems. I think it has the potential to become a really interesting piece if developed further.

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Mona Lisa's not going to be very happy with you, Rolph; turns out she's ditched polyfilla and spent an absolute fortune on something called sfumato; and now she's getting her lips siliconed!😐

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