Hi again David,

I have revised my Initial comment.

My visitation to Gaza or not is an irrelevance in the context of this piece. I have struck it from the text.

It was a moment of selfish self importance for which I apologise.

All voices have value and worth.

David

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Thank you Uilleam I agree with you, to not care about about our fellow humans is evil , and the israeli govt at present is evil

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Thank you, David; the most important word in your poem is “human”.

“Have you been to the crossing point…when were you last there at all?” demanded that supercillious twonk of a shill for a genocidal apartheid regime, whose sole talent is to hate-monger in the guise of being a historian - he who posed, journalist-like, in a flack - jacket and helmet with protection of the "most moral army in the world"!

I don’t need to have been to Gaza, to know the truth; that my country is being run by a psychopathic / sociopathic cowardly excuse for a man, who is enabling genocide there, whilst fuelling racial hatred in the UK…(and that IS awful, truly awful).

My only qualification to comment on your poem is to be human.

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I understand that and appreciate your words David...

Thank you for caring. It is extremely worthwhile, I would not mean to diminish your thoughtful words.

David

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the poem is a bit of shack up from slumber as the slaughter continues , i . I praise your work their . However my compassion is limited to the pen which I have used for a force for good hopefully , thank for your comment Dave

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There are no streets

David

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