I like the correlation between the fine line the Shaman walks, the fine line between light and darkness at sunset and the fine line between wakefulness and the dreamworld of sleep that the sleepwalker traverses in life.
There is much to think about in this excellent poem, Ruth.
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A really impressive, readable poem, Ruth.
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I like this. "In that between never
And forever place" - a lovely image.
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I absolutely love the line
A sleepwalker in the game of life
So well put together Ruth๐
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Ruth O'Reilly
Tue 24th Sep 2024 12:44
Thanks a million to Tim, Stephen, Martin and Nigel for your lovely Comments I really appreciate it and so touched that you took time to read my piece and let me know about your favourite lines from the poem- it means a lot to me๐๐ผ
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