Thank you both, this is my first real attempt at writing and ever posting online. So, I really appreciate the kind words!
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Lovely BS.
"We'll own nothing more than what we need,"
A noble aspiration, and probably a necessary one in today's world.
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Andy N
Thu 25th Jan 2024 20:00
Some great lines in this piece, Becky.. Reminds me of the style of my last poetry book 'Changing Carriages at Birmingham New Street' with the sad, reflective nature here - particularly like the first two stanzas.. this style suits you well I think. You should write more like this (:
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