I love stories which are embedded in a poem such as this. They create and set the scene for the reader. A poem well composed with an excellent use of appropriate vocabulary.
Thank you for this,
Keith
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An excellent poem! Very intriguing and gripping. I loved the last stanza a lot.
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Tom
Fri 22nd Sep 2023 14:50
Thank you Manish, Keith and Kimberley for your very kind comments.
Thanks also to John, Hugh, Stephen, Stephen, Dawn, Holden, Moonlight, Purple Moon, Hélène and John for reading this one and for the likes.
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