Intriguing Stephen.
The last four lines reminded me off The Red Wheelbarrow!
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Thank you, John B and Manish. Yes, when I look at it again, this poem doesn't give you all the answers. Not yet, at least.
Your comments are much appreciated.
And thanks to Keith for liking this.
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I love the poignancy and story telling of this poem. It leaves space for the reader to create scenarios of their own. 😎
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Stephen Gospage
Mon 10th Apr 2023 08:01
Thank you, Graham. I must confess that you have introduced me to the 'Red Wheelbarrow'. Perhaps a writer is not always in control of their poem, which is a good thing as it drifts off into unexplained areas.
And my thanks to Nigel, Clare, Hélène and Stephen A.
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