Number one flows much better for me Frederick.
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Thu 26th May 2022 11:18
No 1 wins for me, it reads better at least for me.
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Red Brick Keshner
Fri 27th May 2022 03:57
Thank you kindly for your honest responses (Rudyard K., Stephen Gospage, and Nigel Astell). I too prefer version 1 and wrote version 2 at the suggestion of some well-meaning critics. Sighs.
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