Believing in yourself
gives you that chance
that built up in every line.
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Thank you J.D and Moon.girl for your comments
Thank you also to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem
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<Deleted User> (31922)
Wed 2nd Jun 2021 18:11
Aviva,
I like the choice of the title, it goes along so well with the positive and up-beat message in this poem. Enjoyed. J.D.
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Aviva Rifka Bhandari
Sat 5th Jun 2021 12:16
Thank you Nigel for your poetic response.
Being believed in
Helps us believe in ourselves,
But even if the whole world
Acts with doubts and disbelief
And mistaken mistrust
We should doubt the rest of the world
Because we are closest to our own truth
And even we don't know everything that we can do.
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