This is so sad x

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Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Thank you to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem. ?

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Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Thank you for commenting Stephen. It is a very uncomfortable poem, but it is a snapshot of uncomfortable thoughts and feelings.

I think in the language and style of interaction in the poem you can see it was written by an angsty teenager, and that's why it rings true. Because it is true (as much as any angst is).

It is also quite an unimportant poem, it doesn't give much back to the reader, but somehow becomes a bit more important within the series of poems as a mark on the map.

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Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari

It's a tough one, Aviva, but it rings true and has a nice flow.

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Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari