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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 13th Mar 2021 20:23

Thank you Nigel and Stephen for your comments. Originally it was supposed to be a premise rather than a premises however I think did those products exist they could be sold on market stalls, door to door, in quaint little shops, supermarkets, and on-line, why not! You could probably buy gift-packs too.

Thanks also to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem. ?

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 13th Mar 2021 17:00

Thanks for this interesting poem, Aviva. I suppose the shop is an online supermarket, where you can order the emotion to suit your need, whatever it may be.

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Nigel Astell

Sat 13th Mar 2021 12:57

I think we keep
the ones we like
someone nasty then
steals them away
we buy the others
to get our own back.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 13th Mar 2021 11:03

Thank you for commenting Julie, and an interesting question. I spent quite a while pondering it, in the end I felt that various emotions probably come in a range of colours rather than an exact one-to-one arrangement, the potential is there for a given colour to be met in more than one emotion?

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julie callaghan

Sat 13th Mar 2021 09:34

I see one of my favourite shops in this poem which sells beautiful threads and wools in an amazing range of colour. I wonder which colour each emotion would be. Over to you.

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