Just caught up with this one, such a beautiful story of everlasting love.
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Thank you very much, Vautaw, you were the first to welcome me to WOL & that gave me encouragement from the start any comments are appreciated good or bad. Thanks again for such a wonderful comment x
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This is a masterpiece. Great poem from the heart. Thank you for sharing it with us. ❤️
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Wow, just got in from a rather busy old day to find so many wonderful & encouraging comments on my poems!
Thank you Paul Sayer for setting the ball away with your comments! Perhaps I should sign you as an agent ?. So glad you enjoyed them and giving me the encouragement to continue as I'm never sure if they're any good. Much appreciated.
Flavia, again, thank you for your kind comments, always grateful. It's a poem close to my heart do glad you enjoyed it.
Nicola, goosebumps are good!
And yes, the lines of some poems flow quite well as they mostly did on this, and then there's those, as you'll know, that are like pulling teeth! Thank you very much.
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So many wonderful lines! Simply a pleasure and so effortless to read. Beautiful poem Stephen.
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Oooh I have goosebumps - what fabulous story telling. I love these lines:
His soul lost its glow
As he faded to grey...
Her world became smaller
Confusing and dark
The rhythm all gone
From her fluttering heart
Fabulous and stirring. Well done.
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Tue 2nd Apr 2024 12:57
Life could be like this.
You are a lucky person, Stephen Atkinson.
Wishing you the good in life.
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