Thx for constructive comments!
I think that is the objective of WoL !

I will not rush in the future though I'm tied down by a workload.

Comment is about Hell knows no fury (blog)

Original item by Alem Hailu G/Kristos

Alem
I think that it's brilliant, an brave to write and post poetry in a second language.
WOL should be a safe place to post such works. Positive feedback is always appreciated.
Sarcasm is the lowest form of wit.
I think that for someone to pick up on a simple typo, and mock is unfair. As you say, we couldn't write a single word in your first language.
Thanks for posting

Cheers Kevin

Ps I think it should read " hell knows no fury" (no apostrophe in hell and only one r in fury)

Comment is about Hell knows no fury (blog)

Original item by Alem Hailu G/Kristos

Hell-knows-not fury.
I wanted to use compound adjective instead of the expression hell knows no fury. It was deliberate as per poetic license.

Be specific in your comment.
Literary competence is required to give a comment. Simply knowing language doesn't suffice.

I did get a positive feedback from readers who got the gist in other blogs like allpoetry.
"Rhymin Pearl - A well written poem indeed I enjoyed the reading of it ?. Keep going and thanks for sharing"

I write poems in the language to be acquired.Hence I outsmart you as you could not write a single poem in my language even if allowed to toil the rest of your life.
Why is that your profile picture shows a loose mouth?

Comment is about Hell knows no fury (blog)

Original item by Alem Hailu G/Kristos

Thx u r right!

Comment is about Hell knows no fury (blog)

Original item by Alem Hailu G/Kristos

I guess that must be pet hell then.

Comment is about Hell knows no fury (blog)

Original item by Alem Hailu G/Kristos