I really like the rawness of your style and how the thoughts are displayed as erratic via the structure and enjambment. Great stuff! Thank you.

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Nice one again! Better still skinny but alive!

Jennifer

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Wow, Simon this is great. It's not often I get to the end of a poem and have to go right back to the start and immediately read it through a second time. Just enough mystery and detail to make for a fascinating read. Brilliant.

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