thanks for the likes and your kind comments Jennifer.
The verse about nature is the keystone to the piece - I wanted a shift from the descriptive at that point to direct folk that this is a warning - not a nature poem.
It may be a bit jolting - but that was what it was in there for ?

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Liked this! The verse about nature to me anyway doesn't seem to belong, because there's no description. But if you like it it's your poem!!! Don't mind me.

Jennifer

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