Don't let something 'different' make you skeptical of posting Hannah. This is how you grow. Trying new things, pushing boundaries.......doesn't matter what others think

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Thank you all for your comments, they mean a great deal. I was initially sceptical about posting this because its slightly different to what I usually write. In answer to Mika's question, that was a typo, it should be "through" not "though".

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I love the flow and rhythm of this piece as much as the sheer poetry of the words.
I totally go along with Po's comments here
Nice one Hannah

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The line “though the dark,” maybe should be “through the dark” ? I was a bit stumped on that line. Otherwise, great poem here. Thanks for sharing.

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I like it Hannah especially the passage:

"mute disease,
creeps fast
striding shrill in media"

Nicely done!

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