Consistent and constantly faithful in its depiction of the
various facets of a distressing condition. On a technical
side, I would prefer an alternative to the double use of
the word "take" in verse nine...but just maybe it fits with
the following line about being "repetitive"?
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Mon 24th Sep 2018 12:11
totally agree and sympathise likewise with the other guys D.D. and also on the 'nice to see you back' dude
Rose ?
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<Deleted User> (19913)
Mon 24th Sep 2018 10:46
What a bittersweet ode to a dreadful condition.
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Big Sal
Sun 23rd Sep 2018 22:23
Excellent poem, terrible affliction.?
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Welcome back Daniel. It's good to se you posting again. I see you haven't lost any of your flair
Nice one
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keith jeffries
Fri 28th Sep 2018 13:52
Daniel,
You handle this poem with sensitivty and a touch of gentle humour but underlying it you do not avoid the tragedy of what it is all about. It is well crafted and in touch with reality. A good work.
Thank you for this,
Keith
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