Cresting the rise I came upon brickworks
gashes of red powdered spent force
cascades of guts pushed back
to a stubbled hill
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Original item by ray pool
Ray - there's a lot to like here. I think my favourite line is 'Cascades of guts pushed back to a stubbled hill'. Derelict buildings/works are fascinating places.
Rob
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raypool
Sat 11th Jun 2016 20:23
Cheers Rob, appreciate it.
Thanks Stu. Great places these derelict areas for the odd poem ! Glad you liked it.
Ray
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