Hi Tony, this engrossed me, really enjoyed reading. I can't make my mind up about the indented text but it kind of makes it look more like a letter, which is fair enough! Jeff

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I really can relate to this piece. It is a reflection of moments of my own life. Thank you for posting it. :)

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Hi again... Also wanted to say that the photo adds to the emotion of the poem. the expression is perfect. winston

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Hi again Tony,

Thinking about this poem... could it be made into a short film? Well only by lots of cgi and lots of £ and even then some poeple would say "it's not like I imagined"
This is the power you have, when you write the words. Its grim in a way ... yes. but I like grim sometimes.
Winston

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Hi Tony, nice poem, song like.

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