Dorothy,

Thank you indeed for your contribution and comment. I value the opinions of others when offered constructively and with kindness. You will notice that every second line of the poem begins with the word "we", this includes me, perhaps more than most. I no longer attend attend any church as I am at odds with the Institution for a variety of reasons, however this has not affected my personal faith, for which I am grateful.

I am passionate about Justice and Peace yet filled with dismay to see society and the world more than ever engaged in violence and greed. This is what drives me. Christian ethics motivate me as they have our legal system for centuries.

Thank you again, it is much appreciated.

Keith

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Keith
I regected my Catholic Faith on the day that I left school and experienced a great sense of relief - but - I retained a sense of what is right.
I have also retained a sense of 'presence' and I have no idea what I mean by that, It is not a 'God' in any shape or form, and Faiths mean nothing to me, I think that they are dangerous, It maybe an awareness of the natural world - but who knows?

I feel strongly that 'Our' role in life is to nuture all life for the future of all, both people and nature.

Sounds a bit self-righteous, and I can't always live up to it, but it beats being told to believe in stories that are not believable and to recite words that have no real meaning.
You mention apathy and fear I would like to add selfishness to that list and also the determination of some to be 'Top Dog' without thought of others.

Dorothy
P,S, I have expierenced 'Good Will' within this blog so I know that some WoLers feel the same.

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Hi Keith, thanks for your comments, I’m glad your imagination has been stimulated by these haiku. Much appreciate you saying so.

Hi Steve, these are four separate poems but the the first three where written at the same time, so I think there is some kind of link between them. Perhaps through the thoughts or emotions I had at the time.
Thanks for pointing out the difference between haiku and Senryu, much appreciated.
Will look up the poetry of Nick Virgillo. Thanks for your time and encouragement.

Thank you Randy, mona and Damon for the likes.

All the best des

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sorry MC - conviction - fat fingers and alcohol ?

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David,

Honest, true and humorous.
Thank you for this..

Keith

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You can find more of my poetry including performance videos here on Write Out Loud or simply by searching on line for DAVID SUBACCHI.

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Jennifer and Steve,

If I may address you together despite your different comments. I do not mention Christianity or any other Faith group in this poem. I am endeavouring to address a moral decline in society whose values have been diluted or diminished. Religion once played an important part but no longer; with no alternative moral compass to replace it. In my lifetime I have witnessed a society which is self ridden, where communities have fragmented, where wealth speaks louder than need. When most people rejected Christianity they threw the baby out with the bath water. It was goodbye to Church and God which was followed by secularism, greed, self agrandisment and relativism and nothing to combat them. In the span of my life time I have seen the demise of decency. This is not wholly attributable to the absence of religion, Church or God. It is a trend which stems from secularism.

The situation is not beyond redemption. Its opponents are apathy and fear. It is interesting Jennifer that it is you who mention Christianity nor a slip of the pen that I wrote this on Good Friday.

Thank you both for reading this poem and making your well founded comments, which I appreciate greatly

Keith

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Hi Keith. A truly zealous post which neatly précis the woes of all mankind (and womankind). I just wonder who saved the souls of the pre Christians, or were they automatically condemned through lack of guidance? The Christian Church as far as I am aware hijacked existing means of worship and converted people who already had a religion.

I am not sure who your sincerely held feelings here are designed to reach. There are actually some of us who have our own designs for living a full and humane existence, and reading your poem just makes me feel inadequate under the light that it shines out. I hope that makes sense; I know you are a very caring and reasonable person. Just wanted to put my point of view!

Some of the tone of the writing reminds me of doorstep pleas from Jehovah's Witnesses.

Ray

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Forgive them father for they know not what they say.

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Thanks Keith and Mona for the likes, and Frances and Jane for the comments as well. As so many WOL members appear to be mature, oldies, senior citizens, whichever you prefer, hope it may strike some cords! The beast has been making rather too many strikes recently!

Jennifer

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I know that!! ? hehe

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Loved this - can be read in many ways. Jennifer

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Hi Keith! Presumably about our rejection of Christianity? ... backs turned against love and acceptance - we have abandoned all that was given - we can return as a welcome awaits us.... . If not, n p as I am famous (in the family) for being as thick as a post! (As they are allo male, this doesn't unduly distress me!) If I am on the right track, it seems to me that the problem is that nothing else has appeared as a substitute for the basic ethics of Christanity - to pursue the worthless and uncertain - to seek instant gratification daily have always been against these. Great writing anyway - food for thought.

Jennifer

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Thanks Jane, Ray, David, and Graham (that's like a phonics lesson, those names all arranged in such a way). Your comments are much appreciated. There's quite a bit to address within them, I'm only sorry that I've been so busy that I haven't been able to come up with an intelligible response.

We're all animals, fer sher, it simply seems that we humans are the only animals capable of thinking ourselves into oblivion--why oh why were we cursed with these damned thumbs?

Rachel

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Thank you Steve. I'll try them.

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Well done
Keith

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Very enjoyable for the neutral, MC. Murder for me.

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MC You forgot to mention all the bright young things who have a right to ' go travelling' all around the world, and not by bicycle or skateboard by the way.

Bring back Boris' water cannon I say!

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Today's 'official' prompt was to write an 'Abecedarian' poem. Well, I tried...

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Ian - it was "conviction of purpose" that you misquoted
as a quote from me in your reply on my home page.
Cheers
MC

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Is Pep Guardiola singing that old refrain -
So near and yet so VAR...?!
An extraordinary match - full of entertainment and drama.

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Josie this is a beautiful poem - so full of hurt - that it hurts to read it.

Dorothy

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d.k., I always turn my computer off before going to bed to avoid any such inappropriate behaviour Sometimes they can get quite loud.
Keith

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Hi Jason, thank you for commenting. I think this poem was about more than snakes - I think it's about love and intimacy.

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Hi Steve, yes that phrase could easily be left out - it just fitted with the weird little rhythm that was going on in my head at the time.

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d.k.,

A good poem. I always cherish those last few minutes of sleep, reluctant to let go of such comfort.

Thank you
Keith

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Thanks very much, Ray.

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Ian,

I take my hat off to you. Blunt, eloquent and straight to the point. The wall in the mouth had me in stitches.

Thank you indeed.

Keith

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A stairway to Heaven?

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emojis drive you crazy? me too.
but...they're everywhere.
i think they breed at night, in the computer.

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emojis are the little icons that you can add to an e-mail.
like happy faces, or thumbs up.
they're everywhere!

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thanks for commenting on 'down at the end of lonely street' Jennifer - yes Elvis had a unique voice and talent - not so sure about Buble though ?
Ian

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thanks for commenting on 'elegy for a ghost' Laura - I know you've been through similar grieving and, as you say, it doesn't get easier with time ?
Ian

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I love the insight into the mutual dance of snake and charmer Hazel. I've always thought of it as more of a dance of intellect vs venom and lightning speed. Although I prefer the snakes to be in their own environment. Great poem.

J. x

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Thank you all, Chelsea, Dorothy and Frances. To be honest it was written with the rhythm of a particular song that got stuck in my head, although if you heard the original it's so much better, that's probably why it scans like a song. Chelsea, I too have spent many hours talking with people at the bars I used to work in and you're totally right, they were some of the most interesting people I've ever spoken to, especially the, "eccentric, strong personalities," I'm really pleased that you like talking to them too.

J. x

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Hi Randy. I'm a great fan of dialects and speech patterns and this is a winner on that score alone - but the whole ethos of the piece is terrific. The simple belief systems brought to bear on the catastrophic natural events says so much about the American historical context.

I Enjoyed this immensely. Congratulations well earned for POTW.

Ray

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Keith,
You have a keen sense of perception, reflected by your words .. Thank you for reading, appreciating and taking out time to comment on the poem.

Mona

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Characteristic nonsense from Yours Truly again, Kev.

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I love it too, Jason. I particularly liked you human approach to the old man... looking deeper into him.
Good stuff. ?

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Jason
I do love this and I agree with Ray - it is a folk song - just waiting for a guitar and a bar stool.

Dorothy

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Jason- I love this entry. Brutally relatable. A “piano man” feel. I work as a bartender at a hole in the wall dive bar where the majority of those I serve are regulars that have been going there longer than I’ve been alive. Each with their own reason to sit with me and “forget about life for a while” (a gold mine for me from a poetic standpoint). Inevitably, they are home to many passages of mine and for that I am grateful.

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This reminds me of a book of poems by Harry Farrell from Chingola, Zambia called 'Copper Dust & Other Gleamings', who often wrote from the animal's p.o.v. It's a particular favourite of mine.
So I'm a sucker for anything which includes these magnificent beasts. Thank you for such a fabulous reminder, Jennifer.

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Wonderful imagery?

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Thank you Keith. Your support means a lot.

If the west refuses to learn the lessons of sacrifice, then we'll deserve to go the way of Rome and Constantinople. Orthodox Christian communities in the Middle East put us to shame.

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Yes!
As a fellow weirdo,
Yes!

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Heavy

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I have also been there and rang that proverbial bell.
Good luck with you life.
I hope everything goes well❤

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John,

A poem of deep anguish to which so many of us can relate. It comes from your heart so has a real heartfelt integrity. The dual photgraph which leads your poem is a dilema, a sample of the misery we witness every day. To draw any sense from this is quite impossible, but you have spoken for many in this poem and it has my respect.

Thank you for your courage and integrity

Keith

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In your words...you may 'only' write...but in my words, you do write well.

Thanks

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What is an emoji...?

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