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Lisa C Bassignani

Mon 15th Apr 2019 21:31

Nice..just went for cleaning the other day!

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Lisa C Bassignani

Mon 15th Apr 2019 21:27

If only everyone could agree and/or understand. I fight every day for my basic civil liberties. As a writer....freedom of speech goes without saying..NO pun intended

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keith jeffries

Mon 15th Apr 2019 21:15

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Lisa C Bassignani

Mon 15th Apr 2019 21:14

I was afraid to let the crazy out, but after your encouragement....couldn't resist.

Lisa

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 15th Apr 2019 21:11

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Mon 15th Apr 2019 20:56

Don

I quite like the person in my head and she is very much a female, we get on well together, we agree with each other and like the same things. No problems there.

However I always chose male dogs over female dogs, they were very affectionate and less complicated.

mmmm what am I saying?

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 15th Apr 2019 20:38

Beautiful, Jason.

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Randy Horton

Mon 15th Apr 2019 20:38

Thanks so much, Andy.

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 15th Apr 2019 20:37

Keith, thank you so much.

You are quite right in your assumption.

Thank you, again.

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Mon 15th Apr 2019 20:33

ian
I love the strength and determination in your poems and I can only echo Keiths words "you are an inspiration"
Dorothy

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keith jeffries

Mon 15th Apr 2019 20:27

Jason,

This poem is so very original, thoughtful and one which sets fire to the imagination. I shall read this several times and keep a copy as it will be a favourite in time to come.

Really well done
Thank you
Keith

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Mon 15th Apr 2019 20:23

trevor
I do love your poems - i look forward to them - and this one one does not disappoint.

Dorothy

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keith jeffries

Mon 15th Apr 2019 20:01

Jon,

A powerfully worded poem in which the reader is left to determine who is being referred to. Dare I say that it is a fairly accurate description of the British Political Class embracing all political parties at the present time. Should I be right in my assumption then I must say that I have seldom read anything so succint and eloquently worded.

Should I be wrong then it is certainly a poem to ponder on and for the reader to determine their own interpretation.

Also a very good poem with an excellent use of vitriolic language.
Thank you
Keith

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Philip Stevens

Mon 15th Apr 2019 19:34

I had to look this up, Senryu that is... still dont get it ... is there irony in there

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Philip Stevens

Mon 15th Apr 2019 18:11

The person in you head should NOT... be gender specific.. ?

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John Marks

Mon 15th Apr 2019 18:05

Thanks Steve.

I do occasionally, when I can afford the printing ink and postage!

John

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Philip Stevens

Mon 15th Apr 2019 17:24

Dear Don Mathews, what is madness anyway. Just a statement not a question by the way ..

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Mon 15th Apr 2019 16:43

Nice to meet you Cindylee. I must say I relate on a very personal level to your two poems 'Know Everything's Okay' and 'Burn Bridges' You have a wonderful writing style?

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John Coopey

Mon 15th Apr 2019 16:07

Thanks, MC.

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Ian Whiteley

Mon 15th Apr 2019 15:06

thnaks also for commenting on 'the turning of the tide' Keith - this poem a day malarky means I'm getting behind on the 'thank you's' - I always appreciate your kind and considerate input and feedback - thanks for taking the time to do so
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Mon 15th Apr 2019 15:03

thanks for your kind comments on 'the turning of the tide' Martin - this NaPoWriMo challenge certainly enables you to walk down some different paths - hence the variety of styles
glad you liked it
Ian

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keith jeffries

Mon 15th Apr 2019 15:02

Hello Ian

You seem to be in full flood at the present time. This is another one of those poems for which you are becoming well known and for good reasons. Apathy and disunity will achieve nothing against corrupt government and oppressive industrialists. You are right to say that only be standing together will be heard and achieve our goals. Keep on writing Ian. You are an inspiratiion.

Thanks
Keith

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Ian Whiteley

Mon 15th Apr 2019 14:59

thanks for the kind comments re: 'with banners held high' Mike - you make some pertinent and insightfull comments as always - glad you liked it. In the process of developing it as a song for the festival with the same name in May - hopefully will have it ready in time
thanks for taking the time to comment
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Mon 15th Apr 2019 14:55

thanks for your kind comments re 'with banners held high' Jason - it is in the development stage as a song which I'm hoping to perform at a festival of the same name on 18th May - glad you liked it mate
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Mon 15th Apr 2019 14:53

thanks for the kind comments on 'with banners..'Keith - I am lucky not to be in the position of the poems theme - but I do a lot of gigs for homeless charities as part of the We Shall Overcome campaign - we are playing the 'With Banners Held High' festival in Wakefield on 18th May - looking forward to that one so much - and hopefully this will be recorded as a song by my band in time to sing it our=t at that festival ?
Ian

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Nicola Hulme

Mon 15th Apr 2019 14:48

Absolutely brilliant as always.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 15th Apr 2019 14:45

Well up to the standard set by this contributor.
Whilst time sees old working practices superseded - and has done
down the centuries (foot-wagon-coach-rail-road-air: to cite some
aspects of the travel industry), the injustice of poverty demands
righteous anger and remonstration in any generation, even more so
when its victims have given much - even to an incapacity to earn - in
the service of their country. There is an irony, however, that a society that produces food banks also produces the condition of
obesity on a truly worrying scale. Back again to the constant challenge of obtaining balance in the demands of this life we live.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 15th Apr 2019 14:32

A reminder of "tempus fugit" to make us fidget!
I find that living alone has one personal advantage - I'm, the only one
I know who doesn't seem to be getting the worse for wear.?

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 15th Apr 2019 14:25

Agree with Brian.
Keep 'em as long as possible, JC. Avoid those words we hear on the
tube here in town: Mind the gap! ?

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 15th Apr 2019 14:20

We live with ourselves, see our face in the mirror, and talk to ourselves on occasions, so it's hardly surprising that any inner voice
has the same origins.

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Mon 15th Apr 2019 13:53

Such a lovely sentiment...love it!?

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keith jeffries

Mon 15th Apr 2019 13:44

d.k

One of your best poems to date both in content and construction. The subject you address is crucial as the consequences of having no real free speech herald the downfall of a liberal democratic society. Few realise this. In the UK laws have been enacted to ensure prosecution for anyone who says something detrimental about anothers religion or race. Such behaviour should be discouraged as a matter of course as it is repugnant by nature but to interfere with the right to speak freely and openly is to court an even greater misfortune.

A good poem and well thought through
Thanks
Keith

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Mon 15th Apr 2019 13:44

Nice to meet you Mona S? Thank you for commenting on 'Overtures'.

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John Coopey

Mon 15th Apr 2019 13:03

I think I follow you, Don!

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Andy N

Mon 15th Apr 2019 12:20

Excellent Randy. Deserved piece in my mind (:

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mona s

Mon 15th Apr 2019 10:48

Thank you Jason.. ?

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Don Matthews

Mon 15th Apr 2019 10:45

John's taking over from Donald
We've got a new ruler of the world
I hear all the crowd yelling "Go John"
Don's done his dash, been impearled ?

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mona s

Mon 15th Apr 2019 10:42

And it takes a special mind to unlock the doors of a child with autism.. Their perceptions are so very unique for us to fathom..
Love the theme and essence of your poem..
Thank you ..

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Don Matthews

Mon 15th Apr 2019 10:22

Keith

You question ' How are you able to attribute gender to the person you speak to in your head? '

I guess I always talk to my inner voice as a male. The question is why? Not being a psychologist I can't answer this. I can only postulate a reason as in the poem

Don

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Randy Horton

Mon 15th Apr 2019 09:57

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keith jeffries

Mon 15th Apr 2019 09:50

Don,

This is an interesting poem. How are you able to attribute gender to the person you speak to in your head? I can understand how we all gravitate to a certain gender in daily life for a variety of reasons. There is a male and female part in all of us. This might explain how we best relate to one gender and not the other. You pose and interesting question.

A very thoughtful poem. Thank you

Keith

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keith jeffries

Mon 15th Apr 2019 09:41

Phil,

What a profound poem as it hits the raw truth of existence and calls for unconditional love. A cleverly presented poem which, in my case, helped me realise my own good fortune and the need to develop a better perspective on the world which I encounter everyday.

Thank you
Keith

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Stu Buck

Mon 15th Apr 2019 09:39

a worthy winner. one of those pieces that defies pigeon-holing and just exists as a self-contained world.

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John Coopey

Mon 15th Apr 2019 09:27

“If I ruled the world”, Don.

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Angel whisperer indigo child x

Mon 15th Apr 2019 09:15

thinking of the 96 xx

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Don Matthews

Mon 15th Apr 2019 08:55

Now here's an idea for you John
The Wergly could replace GBP
As initiator of this new currency
You could be hailed as Brexit rescuer, and MP

Imagine what you could do in your Parliament
Knock a bit of sense in them chimps
Show 'em a Coopey-managed government
Tell 'em to stop being wimps

Gosh John how the hell my mind travels
From your chat with the dentist, me asking price
Then suddenly Wergly replaces GBP
And you become MP, roll the dice

The mind boggles...?


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John Coopey

Mon 15th Apr 2019 08:31

Don and Brian - wergly wergly werg.

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Mon 15th Apr 2019 07:59

Funny, but tragically true. My solution? Make doorways wider!

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Mon 15th Apr 2019 07:57

Love the audio John.

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Mon 15th Apr 2019 04:03

Congratulations! Well deserved.

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