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d.knape

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 23:15

have you ever seen a Tasmanian Tiger?
there are rumors they are still around.
and that YOU have one.

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d.knape

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 23:08

it's poetry.....sorta.

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d.knape

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 23:07

good point about maps confusing women.

if only WOMEN came with instructions!

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Don Matthews

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 23:00

Philipos and Desmond
I also need coffee
Thalia my Muse of Mirth
In china drinks Earl tea

(High class lady she is....)

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Don Matthews

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 22:56

I like the way you use words David. It raises the question do we possess a cruelty gene? Born with one?.....

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Don Matthews

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 22:52

I laboured long and hard I did
In end said "bloody jeez"
Now why dk did I say this?
'Twas all in some Chinese

Call Centre I did ring for help
(Of course it was offshore)
She answered in some Double Dutch
I gave up dk. Shit.

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Don Matthews

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 22:41

Sorta Hannah, Nigel
Sorta Becky, Mae
Sorta Do. and Ruthy
Sorta too dk

(Thalia: Hey? What about me?.....)

Sorta my sweet Thalia
Sorta Muse of Mirth
Sorta Earl Grey/china cup
Sorta Forth of Firth

(She's giggling...I'm back in the good books.....)

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Tue 22nd Oct 2019 22:21

Love this writing, celebrating life, beauty.

Hannah

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Tue 22nd Oct 2019 22:11

Go SORTA for it Don !

Hannah

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Tue 22nd Oct 2019 22:06

There's a wild optimism in this which I like.

Hannah

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Tue 22nd Oct 2019 21:57

A strong poem about an important issue that we see a lot of at the moment.

Hannah

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Philipos

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 20:52

Need my am coffee like a drug - I feel my plugs been pulled without it. Guess I'm not alone by the sounds of it. Enjoyed. P. ?

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Philip Stevens

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 19:47

When you fall, you bounce back Lisa

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Philip Stevens

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 19:40

Thanks for the likes

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Philip Stevens

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 19:40

Thank you for reading ?

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Philip Stevens

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 19:39

Thanks for feedback

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Fred Nicholson

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 18:26

Loved 'Love Chair'.

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afishamongmany

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 17:56

Thanks Ruth, thanks Don, Chris and Robert - yes just over two weeks back in the old country. Back on line but only via a tablet, no office, we rent a box (mobile home/trailer). Surprisingly comfortable for a box. Still not yet in any routine.
Go well
afish

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Nigel Astell

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 16:43

I love it Ruth got one in my size?

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Ruth O'Reilly

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 16:37

An exercise bike is a great way to get your brain working more effectively Nigel, that's why I've put those in the background.

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Nigel Astell

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 16:20

Open the poem
find one inside
open that poem
you find Ruth
working on another!

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Nigel Astell

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 16:10

I'm sure it will be a graveyard smash!

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Nigel Astell

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 16:03

it's got a sorta appeal that could catch on Don

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Ruth O'Reilly

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 16:03

Or it could be a grisly tail! I've got a favorite skeleton dress ha, ha I'll find a picture of it later

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Nigel Astell

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 15:55

Must jump on my bike and get to Spec Savers double quick!

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 15:51

I have known about this tradition for many years but didn't know that the poet could influence the label and add a poem to the back label. Perhaps SA is the first?

I also did not know that the poet received 72 bottles each year for the ten years of his/her tenure as Laureate.

I wonder how much they fetch at auction?

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d.knape

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 15:50

are you a sorta poet
or just out of sorts?

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d.knape

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 15:47

My consciousness has been awakened
but it prefers to go back to sleep.
Not sure what all this is supposed to mean.
Didn't New Age come out in the 60's?
we are now in 2019.
maybe New Age is not so new anymore.
Poems need to be understood to be effective.
Call them Old Age Poetry.


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Adam Rabinowitz

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 15:46

Such a great poem. Thank you for sharing.

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Nigel Astell

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 15:43

Got my skeleton costume ready plus my grisly tale Ruth!

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Tue 22nd Oct 2019 15:40

Ironic, perhaps even hypocritical, when one considers all the millions of young people taking part in the recent eco protests...and what do they all say they want to do? TRAVEL. Just for the hell of it. Don't get me wrong, I'm all for it...it broadens the mind. But don't then preach to the rest of us.

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Ruth O'Reilly

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 15:37

You been walking down Market street again Hugh? I'm sure I'll bump into you there one of these days....but will you recognise me? Who knows! ?

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Ruth O'Reilly

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 15:30

Ah it's back, I just wrote on your wall that it had disappeared! Ha,ha I'm feeling a presence, but then again it may be a kindly spirit who brings a present. Nice bit of suspense going on either way there Nigel.

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Nigel Astell

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 15:29

That's what you call real spooky Ruth - - -

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Ruth O'Reilly

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 15:12

You had some good special effects going on there with the Halloween party. I went to read it and it said ' entry not found' and THEN wait for it......It actually Disappeared. Now. Isn't that the stuff that a proper ghostly Halloween party is made of! ?

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Ruth O'Reilly

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 15:07

Nigel I always enjoy the way you find another poem within the poem. Given me an idea for yet another genre of poetry, The Russian Doll effect!

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Don Matthews

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 15:01

New-Age poetry is serious stuff. Mock it at your own peril. You wouldn't want to be struck by a cosmic thunderbolt powered by electromagnetic forces now would you? Of course not.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 14:48

Experiments in poetry can be fun. But I'm reminded of the column
"Pseuds Corner" in the UK magazine "Private Eye". Or - as a certain
foul-mouthed US tennis player was prone to shout -
You can't be serious! ?

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Don Matthews

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 14:37

Now listen up there poem
You're gonna take new course
No stanzas, meter, rhyming stuff
I'm gonna make you, force

I've got a fan in Nigel
I cannot let him down
I'll change your adjectives to verbs
Whatever's left to nouns

But Don our verse foundation
Was laid by poets old
Shakespeare, Keats and Milton
Please,please don't change our mould

Sorry poem. New-Age is in town. Kaboom.....

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Nigel Astell

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 14:33

Love can wait
then miss out

Love can go
then get hurt

Love can find
warm summer sun

Winter snow falls
butterflies keep warm.

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Don Matthews

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 14:25

Cosmos I hear you calling
Blip... blip... blip.... you say
These blips? what are they meaning?

(Ruth, I'm struggling. What are these blips saying to me?....

I don't want to let the blip makers down. They could be our friendly aliens wanting to communicate,,,,,,)

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 14:22

But we should remember that man invented maps so that they could
confuse women - and do! ?

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Nigel Astell

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 14:19

Good luck Don with this
I see you as a new age poetry navigator steering poetry on a different course.

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Don Matthews

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 14:10

Ruth has turned her babbling
Into a career
Presenter on the radio
Oh dear oh dear oh dear

(Or, very good I hear...)

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Don Matthews

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 14:07

I applaud you Emila.(seriously) Even I, a New-Age dabbler of experience could not come up with such exquisite poetic gobbledygook as this.

If you'll allow me,with respect, to take away another interpretation of your gookspeak. After all this is what poets do is it not Emilia?

mai mai dah , ya ya ya
nyuh nyah ah eh yay
gee doh ooh ooh noo noo
Let's roll in the hay

(Behave yourself......)

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Ruth O'Reilly

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 14:06

I remember learning a lot about baby language for my English language A- Level and it really was one of my favourite parts of the course. It is fascinating learning about how babies learn to speak. My mum told me I started babbling very early on, and that's something that didn't change?

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Emilia Callahan

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 13:41

I like this one, Don. I've been thinking a lot of the universe and afterlife recently as I explore connected themes.

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d.knape

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 13:30


How to make a poem-
read the instructions!

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Adam Rabinowitz

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 12:10

Great imagery. Thanks for sharing.

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Ruth O'Reilly

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 11:27

Good one Nigel, yes it's all about keeping the flow of writing going, from the wonky first drafts to something more worthwhile. As Don says all we can but hope that the readers will be curious to read more of what we're writing, and want more!

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