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M.C. Newberry

Wed 18th Dec 2019 12:35

I have a spiritual affinity with the idea of writing this sort of thing,
having been moved (some years ago now) to write about the
death of the equally famous Denis Compton.
The heroes are all going now
And we are left to grieve;
A fond farewell, a final bow,
Too soon they take their leave.....(extract)
The subject of this news item is to be encouraged to continue on his
path toward adding to the spectrum of entertaining and imaginative poetry.

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Rick Varden

Wed 18th Dec 2019 09:23

Yes it will be just in time to be fully out of the EU Brian! Cheers

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Rick Varden

Wed 18th Dec 2019 09:23

Yes it will be just in time to be fully out of the EU Brian! Cheers

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Don Matthews

Wed 18th Dec 2019 06:03

Thankyou for your first effort as Head Of Publicity Lucy. It can take a while to 'get into' a new job.....keep at it.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Wed 18th Dec 2019 04:00

Po, I am glad you are no longer on the WOLMIA list. I love your reasons for being here. You welcome new poets and always give thoughtful feedback. You are a treasure to our WOL community. ? Welcome “home”❣️

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Wed 18th Dec 2019 03:47

Thanks for your thoughtful feedback Po and Graham. I am grateful for this platform and hope it will be around for eons! It’s a wonderful place to share our work with welcoming and receptive poets that have a variety of backgrounds and experience. I agree that we walk a fine line when sharing POV pieces and comments. It requires public etiquette. Respect for all that have to make the one in a thousand call. Write on!

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Don Matthews

Wed 18th Dec 2019 03:39

Very good Dominique. I've just noticed the perfect/slant-rhymes....nice

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Don Matthews

Wed 18th Dec 2019 03:33

Jason says should check myself
Each day, have I improved?
I just seem to get sillier
As each day goes, it proves

? I'm doomed....

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Don Matthews

Wed 18th Dec 2019 03:13

I like short poems Ray. Well done.

Jennifer, don't take this the wrong way but your computer is still a little wonky. It's created a new word which doesn't appear in the dictionary. 'saythat'. On the other hand we could say your telephone company lady has imparted a hitherto new unknown creative streak to your computer. I would encourage it's new talent to take us into the realms of 'unknown' poetry.

What's that? It's just a typo?....

I was just trying to help.......

Trust you to go spoil my fun.....

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Wed 18th Dec 2019 02:52

Welcome Dominique! I like your writing style. It’s raw and real. A lot of us survivors can relate. I think you will find WOL a warm and receptive place to share your art. Write on❣️

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Jason Bayliss

Wed 18th Dec 2019 02:33

Thanks chaps, it is true, comparing yourself to others is a fools errand, but I do think that you should compare yourself to who you were yesterday, just to check if you're a little bit better or wiser.

J. x

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Tue 17th Dec 2019 19:06

Only another twelve years? No need to make provision for my old age then.

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jennifer Malden

Tue 17th Dec 2019 17:03

Hi Ray! computer has recovered slightly after 40 mins spent testing its speed with a nice lady from the phone company, so I can now saythat I liked this. Short and with every word perfect, very evocative.Jennifer

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John Coopey

Tue 17th Dec 2019 16:22

How was the miscreant’s knee, MC? I’ve heard about police brutality whereby they batter their balls against innocent angels’ knees and feet.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 17th Dec 2019 15:21

The human imagination is the source of wondrous things - and how
much better when it is a gift of love from a parent to their children -
so pleasingly depicted in these lines.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 17th Dec 2019 15:13

Touching and true in its depiction of the human experience across
the years that life allows us. My own mother suffered but was also
lucid at times in the months approaching her death. A tragedy yet
a blessing - depending on how charitable one felt about the
infliction of nature's whims on our fragile minds and bodies.

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Alem Hailu G/Kristos

Tue 17th Dec 2019 15:01

Yes I pine the good old days.That is why I love classic poems.Despite its significance modernity has eroded so many things on its wake.Keep on penning such interesting poems.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 17th Dec 2019 14:55

I can't speak for childbirth but having sustained a ruptured testicle at the knee ( I won't use the expression "hand" in this context!) of a detained miscreant, it's odd but the adrenaline must have been in
full kick-in (oops) mode because it was only later that the discomfort
became apparent - along with the need to have blood drawn out of
the potato-sized swelling sustained as a result. I think the medico
suggested that I lie back and think of England as he wielded a
rather large syringe that quickly dropped out of my sight below
my pelvis. Not an experience I would want to repeat for all
sorts of reasons. That said, I can't speak for masochists either!! ?

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jennifer Malden

Tue 17th Dec 2019 14:26

Thanks Ray and Brian for the likes - and Poem, Don and Martin for the comments. Took me about 30mins to get this to open up!!!!Donìt like the idea of mice pies overmuch!! Hi Don, hope he brings me a new computer, but doubt it! If your present doesn't arrive, guess who's nicked it!Without the computer functioning I can't even look for one on internet.

A Happy Christmas to all Wol members and staff, and if you don't go for Christmas have a good holiday anyway.

Jennifer

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Tom

Tue 17th Dec 2019 14:22

Thanks Kate, I aim to disappoint, without fail, every time.

And thanks miKa, that is reassuring. Strange to think that now I know that, I probably wouldn't have written this poem the way I did.

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Don Matthews

Tue 17th Dec 2019 13:48

I hope it's cools down for Santa and Rudolph Kate

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Don Matthews

Tue 17th Dec 2019 13:47

The hand you see a'waving Ruth
Is fanning my poor bod
It seems to not be working well
Which does seem rather odd

blip...blip...

Janet thinks I'm waving at her.....

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Janet (from some other planet) is my co-pilot friend in a hovering spaceship.

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kimberly

Tue 17th Dec 2019 13:18

Some birds practice their love songs all winter long.

https://www.lyricbirdfood.com/birding-hub/behavior/why-do-birds-sing-in-the-winter/

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Tue 17th Dec 2019 13:03

Urrggh. Hot up here too Don.

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<Deleted User> (22444)

Tue 17th Dec 2019 13:02

Tom, you never fail to disappoint.

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Ruth O'Reilly

Tue 17th Dec 2019 11:46

I see you there a waving
From your place of heat
Whilst here I am in UK
Freezing in my seat

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John Coopey

Tue 17th Dec 2019 10:58

Indeed not, Brian. You have solved the conundrum of which is the more painful,

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Tue 17th Dec 2019 10:31

Women say that childbirth is incredibly painful, but then can't wait to have a second child. It can't be that painful surely? My logic is this...take blokes - we've all had a knock in the bollocks and know how it feels...do you ever hear a bloke say "I'd love another kick in the bollocks!"

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 17th Dec 2019 09:54

My ‘as ever etc’ comment was clumsily put. It was meant as ‘as usual a very interesting and thought provoking piece’. Sorry for confusion.

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John Coopey

Tue 17th Dec 2019 08:18

Erm, yes, I think so, Don.

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Don Matthews

Tue 17th Dec 2019 06:02

Thankyou for your comments and likes. I still have a 44 degree day to look forward to Friday

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Don Matthews

Tue 17th Dec 2019 05:57

As Head of Publicity for the Like-Minders Society my job is to publicize this new project of our Leader. We are a group of fun-seeking offbeat WOL poets (currently 15) who rollercoast around a Theme Park to various stops of poetical interest such as Writers Corners, Traditional Poets Association Stamping Ground, the essential Toilet Stop, our own Music Lounge and a Budding Poets Audition Site.

Should you like to join us contact our Leader Don at the LMS Office during business hours 9am-11pm UK time. No riff-raff or doomy gloomers please. We run a tight ship.

Lucy L (Head of Publicity)

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Aimee

Tue 17th Dec 2019 03:51

Beautifully written !!!

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d.knape

Tue 17th Dec 2019 03:36

not quite sure what you meant Don
but no problem
I write
you write
write or wrong!

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Alexandra Parapadakis

Tue 17th Dec 2019 02:29

Thank you, Martin!

It shouldn't worry you, Graham. Please refer to my initial response on my previous poem (Outside of Herself). And yes, poems can develop many more meanings than the one the writer intended because every reader offers a new perspective. ?

Thanks for your comment, Po.

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Don Matthews

Tue 17th Dec 2019 01:48

Bert?....

Yes Eth?....

You need re-configuring.. You're molecules are all out of kilter....

That's the way the good Lord built me Eth....

Don't think he consulted the plans when you were under construction....

Maybe he was cavoting with the angels Eth?.....

You're full of ideas pet....

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John Coopey

Mon 16th Dec 2019 23:27

Two Low Swingers?

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 16th Dec 2019 23:01

For me, the way you have structured this makes it a difficult read.
Once again I can read along several pathways without knowing if I'm on the right one.
The tags worry me too! As ever etc, etc.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 16th Dec 2019 22:55

? Next stop TLS?

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Robert C Gaulke

Mon 16th Dec 2019 22:27

Thanks, Guys. I'm just the unfaithful reporter to the little dude in my head. B

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Tom

Mon 16th Dec 2019 22:26

Thanks Martin. Bit of a downer this one, but sometimes you just see everything all at once - its ultimate conclusion and it does leave you feeling sad.

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Martin Elder

Mon 16th Dec 2019 22:25

I certainly do remember them . I also remember writing them as well. My grandmother once sent a letter to Australia in the 1930's and the flying boat as they were known then (an aircraft that could land on water) sunk but her letter was retrieved and sent back to her. Unsurprisingly the ink had run a bit. It was one of those that you folded in on itself.
Nice one Cynthia

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Martin Elder

Mon 16th Dec 2019 22:19

I certainly do
Nice one Tommy

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Martin Elder

Mon 16th Dec 2019 22:18

What a delightful tale Jennifer
Nice one

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Martin Elder

Mon 16th Dec 2019 22:16

I started living my life twice
Once for me and then for my fears

I love these lines in particular. wonderfully articulate as always Bob
Nice one

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Don Matthews

Mon 16th Dec 2019 22:13

Joe

Lucy L (our Like-Minders Society Head of Publicity) is reprimanding me. She says why did you assume Joe was in UK? Hmmm I said. to which she replied he could've been in

'Today, the scale is primarily used in the United States, and is also used in the Cayman Islands, Palau, Bahamas and Belize'

Take your pick she said. So I picked you a relaxed poet having a fun time in sunny Bahamas (and all that).

Spot on, Thalia my Muse of Mirth said.

Hey, where's Ruth gone? Am I too hot to handle girl?

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How did you know this I said?

We have ways the girls said.....

I was quite miffed as you haven't put up an audio so how was I to know? You got special communication channels with my girls?

Po, is there some sort of intra-planetary out-of-body thing going on here?

Hey, where's Ruth gone? Am I too hot to handle girl?

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Martin Elder

Mon 16th Dec 2019 22:13

Fabulous as ever Tom
Nice one

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Martin Elder

Mon 16th Dec 2019 22:10

A wonderful piece of writing that doesn't seek to explain itself

Love it

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Martin Elder

Mon 16th Dec 2019 22:04

Very nicely put Jason
Nice one mate

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Don Matthews

Mon 16th Dec 2019 21:58

So good Jason......your usual well thought out quality....

Alone/shone superb eye-rhyming....brought me up with a jerk

Got heapsa friends on Facebook
I wanna be like them
Gotta way long way to go
I'll get there in the 'en

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