This is a beautiful poem, Abdul. Thank you for sharing this. I've always found graveyards to be such peaceful and calming places. I love the expression: to tread gently through the dreamland-beautiful.
Keep writing and smiling.
Best wishes,
Rasa
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Many thanks for your comments, Graham and Stephen. Knotted hankie, Graham? Have you not seen my smart cap? Thanks also to Stephen A, Rudyard and Holden for the Likes.
Comment is about The sands of time (blog)
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Sat 18th Sep 2021 08:14
This feels a bit 'chicken and egg '. Good little one.
Comment is about Exam Question (blog)
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Sat 18th Sep 2021 01:06
Thank you so much, Stephen ?.
Comment is about Wishing Well (blog)
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Long live the Pound and the Pint (sounds like title of a forthcoming poem). I can see you on the beach writing this with a knotted hankie on your head. Lovely descriptions Greg!
Comment is about The sands of time (blog)
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There is a sadness and uncomfortable reality about this poem, Greg. The sadness is wrong-headed policy wrapped in the attractive cloak of old, familiar things (at least to some people). I think you express it really well.
Comment is about The sands of time (blog)
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Thank you to Telboy, Holden, Rudyard, Stephen and Leon for liking this poem. It isn't quite the Less Deceived, but at least it is less obvious.
Comment is about Less obvious (blog)
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Fri 17th Sep 2021 13:09
The best poem I've written about Hands-
Hands Down!
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Comment is about Hat In Hand (blog)
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Thanks Graham for your thoughtful comments as always ?
Comment is about If You Can't Handle Me (blog)
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Love the poem, Katrina. Kelp, yes...
Comment is about Katrina Naomi's sea-swimming poem wins £1,000 Keats-Shelley prize (article)
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A very direct stream of consciousness style piece. The strength is in the words. Sentiments aside the message couldn’t be clearer. Good work!
Comment is about If You Can't Handle Me (blog)
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Stephen and MC, Yes, he was an awful man.
Comment is about THE MUSICAL MUSCLE MAN (blog)
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The situation is a tragedy for many and Erika's poem brings out the tragic aspect and the yearning for home so well.
Comment is about Venezuelan Diaspora (blog)
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Great times, John. I remember the Bill Oddie song:
'Shall I watch Hughie Green again?
He gives me such an awful pain.'
Comment is about THE MUSICAL MUSCLE MAN (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
I seem to remember that John Major tucked his in under both (or did he?)
Comment is about MEN IN SHIRTS (blog)
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Thanks for liking this Hugh, Holden and Stephen. Keep it clean, Stephen! Alcohol can sometimes be blamed.
Ray
Comment is about MEN IN SHIRTS (blog)
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I will try to answer you, but I have to find the answer in the deepest of my unconscious.
Comment is about Venezuelan Diaspora (blog)
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Twas a lewd affair, Stephen G! ?
It supposed to be an indictment of how certain people view us in the North East. I always remember on holiday, some years ago, a well to do business man from London ( net fortune in the millions, apparently) told me he loved our accent, even though he couldn't understand it, but knew that all we ever talked about was crap & piss! ... and we love mash potatoe !
I'd have been insulted ...if there wasn't just a hint of truth in it ?
Thanks for the comment
And the Likes John & Holden
Comment is about One's Crap & PisStory (blog)
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Bugger me, Leon! I do believe you’re right. I’ll leave it as it though, to demonstrate that even genius like mine has fallibility! It seems I was not alone in getting this wrong.
https://www.google.com/amp/s/richardsmithwrites.com/2020/07/02/oill-give-it-foive-juke-box-jury-or-thank-your-lucky-stars/amp/
Comment is about THE MUSICAL MUSCLE MAN (blog)
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Invasion of the body snatchers. They will never be the same again!
Comment is about One's Crap & PisStory (blog)
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Thu 16th Sep 2021 16:54
Your memory is not what it was John. Monica Rose was on Double Your Money with Hughie Green; Janice Nichols gave it foive on Thank Your Lucky Stars.
Comment is about THE MUSICAL MUSCLE MAN (blog)
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Thanks to Hugh and John for like and to K J for the thought-provoking comment.
Comment is about Johnny Bang-Bang (blog)
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Strange to think that there are countries whose people only seek
to abandon them. What path did they take over the years that
brought about such a hateful failure in faith and the future. What
happened to the basic human drive to succeed against the odds
and emerge the victors over adversity, with pride and positivity
in their efforts to make their lands worth living in? What of the
mindset that saw this sad situation occur, not least in those
who presumed to lead others and made such a hash of things.
Are some people(s) their own worst enemies? I wonder !
Comment is about Venezuelan Diaspora (blog)
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Travelling in hope takes many forms, that's for sure.
Sensible use of the limbs will keep the heart working, aided
immeasurably by a well-researched diet plan that feeds and
lubricates "life's muscle" in the most advantageous way..
As for exercise per se - think of all those paragons of human
fitness in sport who suddenly drop dead despite at the exercise
they've indulged in over their not always very long lives! It
makes you wonder, doesn't it? .
Comment is about 7000 steps a day could cut your risk of dying by 70 percent (blog)
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To borrow from a famous musical that was around back then:
"Ah yes, I remember it well." Hughie had the reputation of
having something of an ego, a bit of a contrast to the jolly Mr.
Everyman he put over so successfully on the box back then..
His trick was to act like a confidant between audience and
participating guest - with knowing asides and grins that anticipated future acts on both TV and film.
I recall he lived not too far from my own present address - over
in the Baker Street/ Marylebone area of London. "Seriously folks"
- how he comes back to me now.
Comment is about THE MUSICAL MUSCLE MAN (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Being equipped with a pair of sticks, I got used to receiving offers
of a seat on the bus that took me to my surgery (as was) - usually
from women I might add! But I had got the knack of wedging
myself against a convenient panel and was content to stand for
the short journey involved, often to the surprise of the courteous
would-be donor of a seat.
Thanks for the comments and for the "likes". Much obliged.
Comment is about LAST POST - a re-post! (blog)
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The victors get to write the history, so the good will always win.
Comment is about Johnny Bang-Bang (blog)
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Red kite heart
skyward spirit searching
finding sunshine love.
Comment is about Red Kite (blog)
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Thanks for your likes
Holden
Stephen G
Hugh
Stephen A
kJ Walker
and
Your Royal Poetess.
Comment is about Breaking Point (blog)
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Can't fail to pull with that one, Branwell.
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Was bestowed with a seat by a teenager on a full bus this week .He was a star !!!
Comment is about LAST POST - a re-post! (blog)
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Thanks for the Like & comment Sarah! ?
Comment is about Your Protector (blog)
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Aye, John, lucky sod ?. I've snapped the thread to the loom & legged it!
Until tomorrow ?
And thanks for the like Gregg!
Comment is about Prelude to a working day (blog)
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Yes, Lt Columbo and "The Dawg".
Comment is about Stephen Gospage (poet profile)
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Thanks to Nigel, Angel, Bramwell, Stephen, Rudyard and Holden for reading and liking this one.
I suppose it is a metaphor for disillusion and the collapse of certainty. You start off believing that everything in life is well-ordered, the lines between good and bad are neatly drawn, and then realise that things are much less clear. This does mot mean, of course, that one can't tell the difference when it matters!
Comment is about Johnny Bang-Bang (blog)
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Wed 15th Sep 2021 12:16
Paul needs some hair gel
his hair is out of control!
?
Comment is about Paul Muldoon on bill at Winchester festival's live weekend (article)
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And I thank my lucky stars that these days, Stephen, there is no urgency to rejoin those spinning looms (fabulous line!). Instead I watch others go.
Comment is about Prelude to a working day (blog)
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Thanks, Ray and Stephen. Composed on a walk back across London to Waterloo, investigating some places like Temple I had never discovered before. Thanks for the Likes, Stephen A and Holden
Comment is about London September 2021 (blog)
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“The lamps are going out”, MC. “We shall not see them lit again”. The world is changing and we are too selfish to stop it.
Comment is about REFUGEES (blog)
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Death, war, famine and conquest (instead of "pestilence" I presume) - in dear old La Belle France and its neighbours?
Imagine that! Sacre Bleu! They'd go to war for the insult. ?.
Comment is about REFUGEES (blog)
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Thanks for the Likes & kind comments John and M.C.
And Aisha for the Like ?
Comment is about Prelude to a working day (blog)
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Death, Famine, War and Conquest, MC. In others words, the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse. And make no mistake, the migration will get heavier in the future as climate change renders parts of the world increasingly difficult to survive in.
Thankyou, Stephen.l
And thanks for the Like, Holden.
Comment is about REFUGEES (blog)
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M.C. Newberry
Sat 18th Sep 2021 16:17
I'm with you on this, JC..
Who goes to the bother of reporting let alone complaining about this sort of childish stuff?
What does it say about their mentality? It used to called
"teasing" when I was growing up..
I don't suppose any little "Susie" was mentally affected by being told to "wake up" or any young "Dan" of my own generation got annoyed at being called "Desperate"; a word that
epitomises much of the intellectual perspicacity that permeates
the public forum today.
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