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Ann Foxglove

Sun 21st Nov 2010 05:48

Thanks folks! She was never naughty! Just like her mother!

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Isobel

Sun 21st Nov 2010 00:14

A really beautiful photo and a tender poem.
I followed in my mother's footsteps - smacked my kids till they knew who was boss, in the early days - there was never any need thereafter - and they don't resent me for it. I once went to a parenting class run by a rather religious lady (can't remember whether she was baptist or methodist). She used to wack her kids with a wooden spoon - it came as a shock to some of the other mothers! The gist of what she was saying was that children NEED boundaries - are lost without them. I guess we all have different way of putting those in place. A good bit of discipline wouldn't do the current society any harm though. ( she says jumping down from he soap box)

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shoeless

Sat 20th Nov 2010 23:22

thanks for commenting on my poem 'space'

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Lynn Dye

Sat 20th Nov 2010 23:22

I enjoyed this, Rod, it reminds me a little of my "World Stood Still". I very much agree with Dave's comments on the media. Good one.

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shoeless

Sat 20th Nov 2010 23:22

yes i prefer it with blissful still in , but i like to try folks' ideas out

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sat 20th Nov 2010 22:04

I wanted to add more.
But.... what for?

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Michael Scott

Sat 20th Nov 2010 21:25

Lovely, especially the last line, hope you're OK down there. Great picture, I'm a once only smacker too (so far).

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Francine

Sat 20th Nov 2010 20:26

Oh how I adore his space...

Tu vois... Je pense qu'on pense pareil. ; )

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Gus Jonsson

Sat 20th Nov 2010 18:36

Isobel,

Thank you so much for your comment and i'm so pleased I have helped bring a wee smile to your very pretty kisser.

I 'll tell you how I do it?? next time at an open mike...if you save me a 'Space'

Thanks again

Gusxx

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Lynn Dye

Sat 20th Nov 2010 18:12

I think this is really lovely, Carole. I have a slight preference for the second version except that I would include the word "blissful" from the first.

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Isobel

Sat 20th Nov 2010 17:31

This is lovely Carole - it's hard to choose between the two - I do like the blissful moment of the first though - that moment of drifting off to sleep IS blissful. I'm a bit of an insomniac too so can appreciate this. A lovely conclusion - it does make you wonder why we all fear death so - nothing harder than life sometimes.

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Sat 20th Nov 2010 17:27

Hi - thanks for the comments on my sorry efforts (Happy eater).
all the best. B

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Isobel

Sat 20th Nov 2010 16:34

That's all it takes sometimes isn't it? A fleeting glance of something other, something beautiful co-existing in all this vastness. Moments like that inspire you with hope or at least make you appreciate the wonder of it all.
Lovely take on the theme Cynthia. x

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Isobel

Sat 20th Nov 2010 16:27

Haven't got a clue how to set up my own blog Carole. You aren't the first person to suggest I should write short stories though. I'm not sure if I could give much attention to a personal blog though - what I love about WOL is the community feel - the camaraderie, the banter, the feedback. Would that be diluted if I started posting elsewhere - I'm not sure. I'll have to do some research on where people blog and what they get out of it. Maybe that's something I'll think about in the New Year. Hope to see you around before then.
Isobel x

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Isobel

Sat 20th Nov 2010 16:22

Well Gus - what can I say?

Oh how I adore your way of looking at the space theme - only you could do it! This is fun - and life affirming! We are all here for a reason - it's just a question of tapping into the reason that works for us. I think I over-think things sometimes. My next poem will be on rockets that boldly go...
Thanks for putting a smile on my face. x

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 20th Nov 2010 16:11

Absolutely great! I wondered where you were! Get well soon - then you can outdo Isobel with the sexy shoes! xx xx (two for the left foot and two for the right!)

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Lynn Dye

Sat 20th Nov 2010 14:41

Love the atmospheric feel to this, Ann. You read so well. xx

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Freda Davis

Sat 20th Nov 2010 13:44

Hi Dave, this is really excellent. Taking on the cyber world and expressing the romance of it. Well structured and good word choice. i like it.
Freda

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sat 20th Nov 2010 13:31

Nice and funny poem. Enjoyed reading it. With warmest wishes, Larisa

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Freda Davis

Sat 20th Nov 2010 13:28

Thank you for the comment Lynn. Its got some weak spots but it reminds me of the dreams that make us keep on searching.
I do agree with your political comments. I like the one about the news standing still. It happened again with the Royal Engagement.
Freda

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sat 20th Nov 2010 13:22

Thank you.

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Lynn Dye

Sat 20th Nov 2010 13:16

Oh Larisa! Just seen this, love it, so sharp and brilliant. xxx

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Lynn Dye

Sat 20th Nov 2010 12:53

Only just read this one, Ann, and have to say how good I think it is. Really enjoyed the journey with you. xx

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Lynn Dye

Sat 20th Nov 2010 12:34

I really enjoyed this poem, Freda.

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Gus Jonsson

Sat 20th Nov 2010 11:22

So many thanks for your comment re my 'Space' submission. I hear what you are saying about the photo ... but let me tell you the research and trawl to find a suitable graphic was wonderful.... but then I'M A MAN......

Many Thanks once again

Gus xx

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 20th Nov 2010 05:42

Oh, you must have been singing "It's not that easy being green." I rather liked the new look! xx

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Ray Miller

Sat 20th Nov 2010 00:19

This reminded me of Robbie Burns, oddly enough.Ode to a Space?

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Gus Jonsson

Fri 19th Nov 2010 23:27

Carole, not only is the tweed refurbished ... but Ive taken care to have my danglements and attached appendage re mastered . Looking forward, as always to our meeting.


Many Thanks once more


Gusxx

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Gus Jonsson

Fri 19th Nov 2010 23:26

Thanx ladies so much... Carole, not only is the tweed refurbished ... but Ive taken care to have my danglements and attached appendage re mastered . Looking forward, as always to our meeting.


Many Thanks once more


Gusxx

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shoeless

Fri 19th Nov 2010 22:18

get that coat dry cleaned !! :)

nice poem for the space theme Gus
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Tommy Carroll

Fri 19th Nov 2010 21:46

@bernard: thank you :o)

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Francine

Fri 19th Nov 2010 20:48

Powerful sentiments... Lovely photo too.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 19th Nov 2010 20:29

Great work, Janet, really penetrating, insightful work. What a warmth shines through everything you write now; hands-on awareness, I think, with compassion.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 19th Nov 2010 20:24

A winner, Isobel, honest and just so true of us all. What an age! We never give up, do we, on pouring out LOVE regardless of manipulation? 'Give me a cuddle' turns us to jelly, the little monsters!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 19th Nov 2010 19:55

Haven't we all? Your honesty and power of connecting is just amazing. I think your beauty is the stuff of artists' dreams; it was in this photo and still is. I believe artists would recognize the inherent imagination pouring out of you and would want to try to capture it.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 19th Nov 2010 19:23

As it happened, no ricochets necessary; a birdsong did it all.

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 19th Nov 2010 19:04

What a sexy poem! xx (I don't think you need the photo - I think the poem means more without it - but then I'm a laydee!)

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 19th Nov 2010 18:38

An old photo - alas! And my darling daughter is fine! Just the thoughts a mother has when her offspring are getting on a bit! (But still lovely!) Just a memory of the only time I ever smacked her - and she STILL resents it! (Quite right too!)

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Fri 19th Nov 2010 18:17

Honestry... like baclava, made, I believe, from Honey and Pastry (and a few Wolnuts, maybe ?) :)

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Fri 19th Nov 2010 14:49

I like it and very true.

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shoeless

Fri 19th Nov 2010 14:08

i have thought .. develop your own blog and post a link here each time you create something you want reading , critiquing ( is that a word )

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Laura Taylor

Fri 19th Nov 2010 14:06

I wish! I'm not quite sure where the last few hours went...oops.

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Andy N

Fri 19th Nov 2010 13:57

sentiment but i like it, isobel.. i've wrote a few pieces akin to this about my nephew who is 3 next week... someday i'll show him them, but not yet

but on your piece, i particularly like the honestry in the piece x

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Fri 19th Nov 2010 12:50

Ah Isobel, I was wondering what point you were making too :-)
My mother brought me up believing I was born on a Monday. Later I discovered it was Thursday which defies the original saying in terms of actual travel but is true in other ways.

This would be a decent filler in a performance or read around with the right vocal intonations.x

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Isobel

Fri 19th Nov 2010 12:42

It wasn't an important point - just a silly one - that I was a Friday's child not a Wednesday one (loving and giving as opposed to full of woe) I think most of us are though - we just cope with the woe as we go along the way :)
I'm sure I'll worry a whole lot more about the girls - something I'm not looking forward to!

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Laura Taylor

Fri 19th Nov 2010 10:41

Well that's very nice dear, but I play Scrabble to WIN! So you can make your pretty patterns, and I'll just...win :) By a ridiculous amount. ;)

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Fri 19th Nov 2010 10:37

thankyou steve!

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shoeless

Fri 19th Nov 2010 10:36

i did wonder ..

scrabble you are on , but see i would annoy the bejesus out of you because my idea of a good game is lots of wonderful words interlocked making the nicest possible pattern , oh is someone supposed to win ?!?!

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Laura Taylor

Fri 19th Nov 2010 10:35

I like them both equally, have to say. Also have to say that I think you should get up and read one of these at the next wol - do it, do it, do it

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Laura Taylor

Fri 19th Nov 2010 10:32

Yeh I know what it referred to, durr ;p *whoosh* what was that? It was the sound of a joke going over your head hehe ;p

I DO have a competitive spirit, although I don't expect to win on here. Pool, yes, and god help you at Scrabble quite frankly cos I'm a monster at that ;D


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