John, you are the only man I know who can rhyme clitoris with Doris. Well done. Win x
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Original item by John Coopey
Hi Antony, good to see an actual pic of you. Good luck with your words. Enjoyed reading some of your samples again tonight. Win x
Comment is about Antony Owen (poet profile)
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Enjoyed this Steve - very evocative - you have a real feeling for words. I also liked your profile poems especially Skiddaw. Skiddaw gave me what remains a supreme moment on the hills, many years ago. The poem was perfect
Comment is about A Dog's Life (blog)
Original item by STEVE RUDD
I enjoyed reading this - great questions and interesting responses - particularly relating to poetry in schools.
I currently work in a primary school and have children at all levels in the education system. What strikes me now is the fact that creative writing ceases after primary level - and even there it is much reduced, from what I remember when I was at school. There is much more emphasis now on 'persuasive writing', and writing to inform; writing leaflets, instructions etc. Believe me, it is the most tedious exercise imaginable writing out instructions on how to get ready for P.E....
How can we expect our children to engage with poetry when they are not having a go for themselves - experiencing first hand the fun that can be had with language?
On that score, I'd agree also in the dumbing down of society - I don't reckon a TV and playstation in every bedroom helps much! I've even heard that the abbreviation gr8 is acceptable in certain english exams, where spelling isn't deemed important.
I would agree about Haiku also. Most english examples of it are pretty poor - just carving up of syllables really.
Not sure I completely agree with the response to page/performance poetry. Clearly, all poetry can be performed, just as all poetry can be read. Certain types of poetry work better on page than stage though and visa versa.
Think that's me done. Great interview - I enjoyed.
Comment is about The Write Out Loud interview: Fiona Sampson (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
I enjoyed the poem, even though I don't like dogs. Alas, my wife does. The last couplet is good, a fitting end.
Comment is about A Dog's Life (blog)
Original item by STEVE RUDD
I really enjoyed Gonaways - it connected with something in me. I've moved around more than I'd have liked and would agree that you can never go back to the person you were - the house doesn't exist any more. I really love the way you express that.
Enjoyed A Deadman Speaks to his Daughter - that's how I'd like to imagine it.
Comment is about STEVE RUDD (poet profile)
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Good for you, Isobel. She sounds like a great dog. If you don't want her, we'll have her.
Thanks MC. Let's hope, eh?
Comment is about A Dog's Life (blog)
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What a lovely poem Steve. Honest and down to earth - right up my street.
We've just taken on an orphaned dog - a long haired 10yr old border collie with smelly breath and hair that gets everywhere. I'd been fighting having a dog for years and when we first got it I was relieved that I wouldn't have to look after it beyond 5-8 years. Now that fact really worries me, because she's bonded big time with everyone - completed the family in fact. So I can understand in small part, how you must feel.
Comment is about A Dog's Life (blog)
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Hara Willow from Poets a'Hoy of Hoylake relaxing after her 2nd (Yes 2nd Win) at Poets Corner Tuesday Night...Well Done You!
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My sister who has kept. loved and lost many dogs would know your feelings. Loss can but
point the way to the chance for another to enjoy a "dog's life", to make a sad owner a glad owner once again.
Comment is about A Dog's Life (blog)
Original item by STEVE RUDD
Provocative - and entertaining. A welcome
combination. As a versifier, I raise my pen
in salute.
Comment is about Eyes On A Winter Page (blog)
Original item by Ian Gant
Well done Kealan on your joint 1st place in WOL comp.
Comment is about Kealan Coady (poet profile)
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Thanks Lynn for your comments on My Feotal Distress.
Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)
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Thanks Ann for your comments on my Feotal Distress.
Congrats on your 1st place.
Well done!
Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)
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i agree.. Libraries are defo been taken for granted
Comment is about Acrostic poem on Libraries (blog)
Original item by Andy N
Thanks for your comments. I am open to any ideas to help me improve.
I wrote this in my head while walking in the lake distrct.
I tried to keep it as tight as possible cos I didn't to ramble on and lose the picture I had in my mind.
Comment is about Gray Nicholls (poet profile)
Original item by Gray Nicholls
Thanks fo your comments.
I wrote this while working with young people who are at risk of peer pressure.
I use this to kick start dialogue etc. Then they can use their own words/poems to buy into expressing themselves.
But it can be used for any age group.
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
"Relax" is one of those words that commands the ooposite. Like "Don't panic!"
Comment is about SYMPATHY FOR A BROTHER-IN-LAW (and others!) (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
..... a comment from the back of the class!
Comment is about Don't cry: Etta James (blog)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
She's still the best version by a mile of "I'd Rather Go Blind". Strong vocal overlying that vibrato bass.
Comment is about Don't cry: Etta James (blog)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
Whats a clitoris???
Ha!Ha! Only joking. Just thought I would open up a whole new avenue of tongue twisting conversation.
Research, converstion, touch, feel, imagination,sharing and patience come to mind. When looking to find and enjoy something.
Just like writing poetry.
Comment is about Clitoris (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
*groan*
Ya daft get! :D Aye see thee there!
Comment is about Mike Hilton (poet profile)
Original item by Mike Hilton
A pithy observation on the difficulty of being
true to oneself...especially in the context of
human relations.
Comment is about DON'T LET THEM FEED OFF YOU (blog)
Original item by Mike Hilton
A Poem - Days...by Graham Robinson (an adaption of a Philip Larkin poem)
What are days for?
Days are where we all live-
They come and go every day-
and have so very much to give.
Days come time and again, it really is a feat.
Daytime then passes to her friend - night time-
together they make our lovely days complete.
Then they allow us peace and quiet whilst we sleep.
Days are so very happy to be in-
for where else can we all live but days?
Days are always there to help us enjoy things-
in so many different ways.
Comment is about Graham Robinson (poet profile)
Original item by Graham Robinson
Sorry about that mate!I must have got mixed up in the excitement!I suppose you could say it wasn't TAYLOR made because of all the TINKERing about on the keyboard. I guess I'll just have to SOLDIER on and stay away from SAILORs especially with an Italian Captain!
Rock on, hope to see you at the Tudor next time.
Mike
Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)
Original item by Laura Taylor
Aha - you replied to my other note on your own profile! Handy hint and tip Mike - if replying to someone else, put it on THEIR profile, otherwise they don't see it :)
Anyhoo, ta very much for y'note on Cause and Effect Mike, appreciate it :) Tis a great one to perform that - I get proper riled up hehe
See ya soon I hope, take care xxx
Comment is about Mike Hilton (poet profile)
Original item by Mike Hilton
A great read Laura- Straight away it makes you sit up and take notice. I can imagine you delivering this in your own energetic and unique style. Loved it!
Comment is about Cause and Effect (blog)
Original item by Laura Taylor
Hi Harry. I like the sub title (sorry Ann)-I can see the other side eventhough as Ann said it's a serious poem.
Good stuff
Comment is about THE NIGHT BATTLE (blog)
I love this Anthony - and the audio additions are great. (Next time you come to Poetry Mine I'll try to provide a windy night for your sound effects - shouldn't be difficult here in Cornnwall - you can add your own echoing footsteps!)
Comment is about bay 3 (blog)
Original item by Anthony Emmerson
I like this Harry. But I think the subtitle spoils it, as if you are trying to make it comic, when I think it is a serious poem. Just my thought!
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What a striking poem - don't think I've read anything like it. I love "the mind's limbs had grown gaunt"
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Crafted and compelling, but what is it about? Visiting a woman with dementia, and the struggle to connect with her, maybe?
Comment is about bay 3 (blog)
Original item by Anthony Emmerson
I've had this happen a few times too... : /
Comment is about dead daffodils (blog)
Original item by Ann Foxglove
Just finished commenting on John Keanes fine poem. This could have been written as an answer to it.
(Those footprints in the snow, as a metaphore of absence, are as artistic as anyone would wish)
Lovely sympathetic poem.
Comment is about bay 3 (blog)
Original item by Anthony Emmerson
Nice ambiance and a bit of a mystery... I now know what an anglepoise is!
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Original item by Anthony Emmerson
I like it. Nice audio that you've taken some time over - very atmospheric and scene setting.
I think you convey very neatly the facets of the personality you are describing. I like the way your verses are carved up into those different mood swings. It flows. x
Comment is about bay 3 (blog)
Original item by Anthony Emmerson
Hi Laura, new Bolton WOL start 7.30, be great to see u in March when Petrova on, will send you FB invite anyway, Jeff X
Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)
Original item by Laura Taylor
A young fellow new to the group wrote:
A peacution freeze
In the midnight breeze
...which was nice.
Comment is about January Write Out Loud Collage Poem (blog)
Original item by J F Keane
Yes - your story made me laugh. I think the whole female sexuality thing isn't helped by woman's natural shyness. In my generation it was definitely taboo - and I reckon many thought and still think there is something wrong with them. Even when they find out they are normal - finding a voice to express yourself on these matters can be hard cos there still is a lot of ignorance on this subject - in spite of Cosmopolitan! We should set a themed poetry competition on the subject - all prizes could be of the marital aid variety :)
Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)
Original item by Laura Taylor
<Deleted User> (6895)
Thu 19th Jan 2012 16:53
Haha - I shall stop derailing JCs thread and reply here instead!
Well yeh, totally - sadly it's very common for people to just not bother learning how each others bodies work for the best...what a loss eh?
Heehee - a bloke I knew once confessed to 'learning everything' he knew about sex from porn films. I was AGHAST! Didn't know where to start to discuss that. So I just fell about laughing and was immersed in this huge sense of shocked disbelief, that he actually thought that was real and true!! Even now, oo about 6 or 7 years after he told me, I still delight in telling other people about it in front of him. I figured the shame of it might provoke him into finding out the reality of it all :D
Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)
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great to see you doing well! Will try and catch a show...
Comment is about Tony Walsh aka Longfella (poet profile)
Original item by Tony Walsh aka Longfella
Areet brutha!
Heh - you know, I only really like a couple of JCC's output. It did perform well though, Cause and Effect, done it twice now (most recently at me guest spot in Hoylake on Tuesday) mostly cos I still get so riled about its content!
Oh and yes, bang on with what was left out of the bible! Still and all, I think some of the prophets stuff and the gospel of Matthew are just incredible bits of writing. I found it really inspirational - had a bit of a run with religious-flavoured poems for a while there.
Ha - 'you're simply excusing your own continuing bad behaviour' - ain't THAT the truth. That comes out of the same bag as 'it's ALWAYS been like this/that' as a way of justifying extreme imbalances of all kinds of things. Society, in its total refusal to engage with me, taught me how to confront every single last fucking thing it throws at me.
You a William Blake fan at all? Now that guy was a star - absolute belief in his own opinions etc. Because he'd THOUGHT about it all and questioned it all.
Comment is about Richie Muster (poet profile)
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Truly awesome. Can relate to 'the Commuters' so much! All the best :)
Comment is about Louise Fazackerley (poet profile)
Original item by Louise Fazackerley
Yes - you have a valid point there Laura :) By 'right partner' I meant one that was open minded to the way a woman's body really works and happy to factor that into the fun - rather than one totally oblivious or believing of all those porn films they like to watch...
Comment is about Clitoris (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Yeh but come ON Is - would you really wanna swap the serial multiple orgasm capability for something you can stand up to piss with?
As for the 'right partner' - see 'right hand' ;D Or 'marital aids' as they so quaintly used to be called! :D Still makes me chuckle that.
Comment is about Clitoris (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Harry O'Neill
Sat 21st Jan 2012 11:46
Anne...Re the subtitle:I used to perform it with the joke that it was written before `Viagra and the Pill had spoiledthe whole bloody shennanigan by casualising it`But wasn`t going to blog that bit. But I`d just read a report that large sections of Japan`s youth were actually becoming dis-interested in sex and began to get the horrible fear that any youngster under the age of forty might not even `get` what the poem was about.But generally you`re right - so it`s off.
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