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dorinda macdowell

Tue 15th Jan 2013 09:46

What a great meeting last night: WOL in Stockport just gets better and better...............

John, I do think it might be worth pursuing the Edgeley link here with the US one! - yes, I know, as I said, a long shot...........but perhaps worth a thought, especially bearing in mind that WOL are planning a wider group than just here in Britain...........could that all be tied up together? Anyway, do have a think and I won't DODGE the issue if help is needed along those lines (my sad attempt to make a play on words ie: Dodge Hill...........hmm.............)

OK I'm going I'm going.........love to all....D.

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shoeless

Tue 15th Jan 2013 08:50

I guess he didn't pick any of mine then ,,,

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Tommy Carroll

Tue 15th Jan 2013 01:49

Laura you are now officially my second favourite poem on this site- That is all.

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tony sheridan

Tue 15th Jan 2013 00:08

Hi John. It takes something special to make me laugh out loud. Well done mate! Take care, Tony.

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tony sheridan

Tue 15th Jan 2013 00:01

Soon to be part of the fabrics of time. Great line.! Great poem! Take care, Tony.

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Greg Freeman

Mon 14th Jan 2013 23:36

It was Freda starting a discussion thread about it that alerted me, Julian - and Isobel before her - so they deserve the credit! Incidentally, the Guardian mentions Ward's former profile on Write Out Loud. Are we taking the view that all publicity is good publicity?

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Julian (Admin)

Mon 14th Jan 2013 23:31

Well done getting this story up two days before the Guardian, Greg. Is that a scoop?

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Tommy Carroll

Mon 14th Jan 2013 23:30

THIS?

#1 Rachel- ''I have my own genres.'' Tae Kwon Do or butchery may resolve your need for 'poeticide' ;o). I do re-read my own stuff regularly- and sometimes also feel a distance between 'us' both. Maybe that is the sign of nascent maturity?
10/01/12

#2 Rachel- re your post to myself; have you not considered that your poetry may be 'universal' and therefore have value to an unknown reader?
09/01/12

#3 poeticide is a good word. i keep the ones that are important. some get deletisized.the genre thing is really to say i have a distance from a lot of my subjects but make them personal. some turn out to be something i want to keep personal. sometimes i write for me. sometimes for others, but i agree that nascent maturity allows for me to see that sometimes what i write is an elaborate escape and sometimes i like to keep it real.
11/1/12

4# yes tommy i have thought about that and i agree, its really why i continue to post or write at all. however i also believe in the field of dreams...'build and they will come' only in this case instead of building a big baseball park i clear out my old poems to make way for the new. fresh ideas. in art i work sequentially, ideas build change and develop. with writing i like to write as if ive never written anything before. which is why some read like that. i like to write with different 'voices' from different perspectives and let styles work together. i have my own genres.
9/1/12

#5 'new me.' sometimes i read back old poems and they have become that. outdated thinking, old thought processes. i like to clear em out and start again with a fresh page hoping for inspiration. thanks for asking x

#6 tommy, its a tough one. i believe that if something is written and posted and it offends which all sorts of material is likely to do on all sorts of grounds..i think the writer should be held accountable to their readers as would be with published work. here a comments system operates.so if i were to offend i would personally feel obliged to defend, explain my writing. sometimes its an agree to differ situation. if someone were to post something inciting hatred be it racial, concerning disability, whatever i still beilieve it should stand and be criticised. As such it offers an exampler of its inadequacy as an idea. if someone were to post sexually inapropriate material i believe there should be a standard of censure based on the accessibility of this site to young people as a moral obligation.
concerning freedom of speech once blogged this goes out to the world potentially. Its a gift but just a medium. free media..is up for exploitation like anything else. I think we can only measure our own writing. I have only ever once been offended by a slight comment on this site and ive been a member for years. I think that a sign of its credibility and the level of responsibility of its writers.
Thanks for posting this.
8/10/11

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Tommy Carroll

Mon 14th Jan 2013 22:53

''MC. I suspect I sit a little left of you (though not as near the touchline as a lot of these barmpots!).'' HAHA

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Rachel Bond

Mon 14th Jan 2013 22:27

hi tommy...now im sorry but you put an interesting comment on my profile and its been so long since i was on here that ive forgotten to which, what, who it refers?? please remind x

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Dave Bradley

Mon 14th Jan 2013 22:12

You've done it again John. This will get some comments. Are you working your way through someone's 500 greatest hits?

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 14th Jan 2013 17:46

Thanks Yvonne - I guess that the "Creator" must have decided that love per se was not conducive to progress or else humans might be inclined to stay happy in a state of commonly enjoyed conviviality and go nowhere in the greater scheme of things. Would that be so bad, I ask?! Instead, we seem to have been programmed to have the capacity but not the total commitment...a sort of emotional half-way house of "one kiss forward...two kicks back"; and vice-versa.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 14th Jan 2013 17:36

"Je t'aime" for the New Year...by a stretch!

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Yvonne Brunton

Mon 14th Jan 2013 17:27

Ha Ha liked this. Reminds me of the joke about the 5 star hotel - all easily visible through the hole in the ceiling!

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 14th Jan 2013 17:17

I have ambivalent thoughts about the mining industry. I accept its importance as a mainstay of the industrial might that propelled this small country to the fore in other days, yet feel immense sympathy for those men (and boys!) who worked in it, and the animals that had even less of a choice. Who, I have always wondered, would WANT to work as a miner? And with that in mind, I have also wondered why there should be such resistance to seeing the end of such a dangerous and debilitating way of life...especially if it offered the chance of another existence, helped by a financial incentive. There must be plenty of people seeking the opportunity to strike out on their own OR choose a different way of earning a living...even it it means moving elsewhere. But maybe that is the biggest hurdle for so many...moving elsewhere. Is it the fear of leaving what you know - a close-knit community in work however mean and hazardous - for the unknown of a wider world? This may be a "northern" trait as I recall that the tin miners of Cornwall became well known in other lands - seemingly willing to export their particular expertise.
Not a calling for the claustrophobic - and I wonder about life insurance rates!!

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Yvonne Brunton

Mon 14th Jan 2013 17:15

A lovely image painted in so few words.I love the 'barcode trees'.

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Yvonne Brunton

Mon 14th Jan 2013 17:07

Well said, M.C. Would any other exhortation be required if Altruistic love were the primary premise?

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Greg Freeman

Mon 14th Jan 2013 16:56

These are the competition results sent to us by Cafe Writers. Congratulations to all!

Results

1st Marie Naughton (Manchester) Brain, £1,000; 2nd Jane Monson (Cambridge) Beam of Light, £300, 3rd Colette Sensier (Norwich ) I Have My Mother’s Eyes, £150. Norfolk pPrize: Tim Munsey (Norwich) Wetland, £100; Funniest: Tim Clare (Norwich) Mango, £100

Commended, £50 each: Rosemary Norman (London) Juggler; Cathy Bryant (Manchester) Summer Rain and Such Fol-de-rol; Ian Dudley (Oxford) To Rest; Amali Rodrigo (Mumbai) I Think of a Very Large Mechanical Mouth; Vahni Capildeo (Oxford) Mercy & Estrangement;
Jonathan Beale (Middlesex) Easily Forgot

Here is Marie Naughton’s winning poem:

Brain

Glistens in a pool of saline. Delicately eased
from case of bone. Pale as any shell dweller,
blind creature, unaccustomed to light. Colour
of river clay, oyster mushrooms, yeast. Runnelled
as a walnut. Ferns, curled, at the moment
of unfurling. Clusters of bladderwrack.
Bobbled pearls. Universe in a bulb or corm.
Truffle slivers, indigo- and amber-stained.
Cauliflower floret, sliced. Row of winter poplars.
Shale tideline, telltale gap.
Limestone landscape, clints and grikes.

The prizegiving will take place on 11 February at Take 5, Tombland, Norwich NR3 1HF. It begins at 7.30pm, with readings by judge Ian Duhig and major prizewinners.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 14th Jan 2013 16:52

The human desire to impart the unknown with a
human identity, as in the coming of Christ to
this planet in our form, is understandable - &
a quick way of getting your "word" across if you seek to convert others to your way of thinking.
The "chicken and egg" question that our intelligence provides has yet to be resolved
when considering creation in the religious sense, and in a more ignorant world the easiest way is to ignore it altogether or
respond to it as "beyond our understanding" -
which, of course, it is.

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Harry O'Neill

Mon 14th Jan 2013 16:08


Ged,
Just catching up...good to see you blogging

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Cathy

Mon 14th Jan 2013 15:54

Poignant. A lot said and there is not enough rhyming poetry about!

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Harry O'Neill

Mon 14th Jan 2013 15:48


Anne,

Thanks for the re-welcome( as warm as your
well-remembered first one)

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 14th Jan 2013 14:08

Very beautiful poetry.

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 14th Jan 2013 14:06

A lovely poem. I recently put one on here about never seeing the ghost I wanted to see - but maybe he is around. I feel like your poem has answered a bit of a question for me. As always, sensitive, thoughtful.

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 14th Jan 2013 14:00

Hi Ludo - a warm welcome to SWOL - hope you enjoy the site.

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 14th Jan 2013 13:58

Hi - and a very warm welcome to WOL. Hope you enjoy the site :)

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 14th Jan 2013 13:55

Hi Tom - welcome to WOL. Good luck with thatr hit single! Hope to see (and maybe hear) more of your work on here soon.

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 14th Jan 2013 13:53

Hi Harry - looking forward to seeing more of your candle boats of poetic endeavor on here soon ;)

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Fkx

Mon 14th Jan 2013 09:38

Loyalty & mateship. A devotion that covers and protects, even to one's personal loss & hurt. Admirable & noble even if it can feel or look like stupid martyrdom. Thanks for sharing.

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Laura Taylor

Mon 14th Jan 2013 09:35

Many thanks Mister Black

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Fkx

Mon 14th Jan 2013 09:29

Thank you, kindly. I am most appreciative of your visit & honest response.

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Katy Megan Hughes

Mon 14th Jan 2013 07:44

: ) lol!!

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Jon

Sun 13th Jan 2013 22:27

Hi Shirley,
Great,under stated poem that perfectly explains how depression works,and the secret suffering of the afflicted. As usual,love the pic too x

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Val Cook

Sun 13th Jan 2013 22:15

Oh! I didn't know about Janet or John.It is such a shock Isobel. They both supported WOL at the Howcroft coming over from Wigan in all weathers.
I also have fond memories of Janet,we once got lost one evening,driving over the hills to WOL at Hebden Bridge,finally arriving in fits of laughter,that was Janet always a smile for everyone. She will be missed.

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Harry O'Neill

Sun 13th Jan 2013 22:04

M.C.
Regarding your point about`more to existence than we know:

I know the arguments about `Paley`s Watch`and design,
but every time I listen to dear old national treasure David Attenborough (and he is a national treasure)relating his anti-theism...and then look at the amazingly interlocking and almost miraculously colourful and fascinating scenes photographed by his
wonderful phographers behind him as he speaks, I can`t help suspecting that someone `up there` is taking a bit of a rise out of him.

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John Coopey

Sun 13th Jan 2013 22:01

Oi! I heard that!

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Isobel

Sun 13th Jan 2013 21:39

I'm delighted to hear that there is a simple explanation for you disappearing like that :)

Re photo - any will do - how lucky are you not to be visually challenged - like what John Coopey is... ;)

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John Coopey

Sun 13th Jan 2013 21:16

...that comment about trying to find a photo that does justice...
...best keep looking!

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Harry O'Neill

Sun 13th Jan 2013 21:11

Isobel,
Your chat request kept coming up and I kept ticking `allow` but nout happened and as a computer thick `ead I didn`t know what to do next.

(I presume it was to do with old stupido deleting himself off the profiles by accident)If it was anything else let`s know.

(I`ll add a photo when I can find one that does Justice, homage, adoration, etc; to my immense good looks)

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Isobel

Sun 13th Jan 2013 20:36

Thanks for your comment on my FB poem Cathy. Yes - speaking to the wall is a strange concept - you ARE speaking to yourself - but at the same time everyone you ever knew - from the person you met in a lift a day or so ago to someone you haven't seen since your first job 20 years ago... Facebook is a crazy crazy place!

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Nigel Astell

Sun 13th Jan 2013 18:04

Sexy lady
Seductive glasses
Poetry book
Would love
To borrow
Mind you
I might
Just get
Stuck on
Page three.

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John Coopey

Sun 13th Jan 2013 17:47

Thanks for your comments on "You've Met The Met", Laura.

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John Coopey

Sun 13th Jan 2013 17:46

Hello Harry,
Thanks for your thoughts on "You've Met The Met". Time was when the NUM were a significant if not enormous power. In their time, leaders like Gormley and Scargill were names everybody had heard of; likewise Vic Feather or Len Murray.
Who knows who the President of the TUC is these days, let alone a piddling little union like the NUM.

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Travis Brow

Sun 13th Jan 2013 17:42

Thank you very much.

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John Coopey

Sun 13th Jan 2013 17:41

Hello MC,
Thanks for your thoughts on "You've Met The Met". My own role in the strike as a manager was to help staff the pits on a care and maintenance basis, preventing them fopm gassing up or flooding so there'd be something for the miners to come back to!

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John Coopey

Sun 13th Jan 2013 17:33

Food for thought, MC.
...and an honest form too. No pretence of "free verse" by the ritual chopping of prose into little lines.

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Nigel Astell

Sun 13th Jan 2013 15:59

No regrets
Sounds bullet proof
But I'm not sure.

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Fkx

Sun 13th Jan 2013 10:47

There is a weight that a poet bears
although there along the edges the answers are scarce. There is a soothing undertone to this poem that allows what is not yet seen to comfort the begging heart of understanding. Thanks for sharing.

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Fkx

Sun 13th Jan 2013 10:36

Having someone written into your life, that is so powerful and a union so intimate it is divine.
Thanks for sharing!

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Steve Higgins

Sun 13th Jan 2013 10:18

Liked this katy,
my problem is usually the other way
If I had said no
instead of yes!
Best wishes, Steve

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