I love this Kay Li.

The theme is lose to my heart since it lifts human boding and intimacy to a higher plane. I'd like to see some more.
It flows sweetly too. Thank you so much.

Raj

Comment is about I Give My Soul to You (blog)

Original item by Kay Li Su

Colin, Colin, Colin, I really don't know what to say. but you are a pretty swell dude. and if I knew anything about real poetry, I'd critique the hell out or you right now. you always strike the feeling in your work. and on a personal note; I have always said the two best things in life are boobs and bacon. But in your case it looks like it's buttocks and bacon.

Write on brother

Warn Out Shoes, OUT!

Comment is about 'At the sink' by Colin Hill is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Like the T-shirt, Nigel - they could catch on!

Comment is about Write Out Loud Stockport's open mic away day - in Marple (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

The Journey

A young writer starts a journey
towards a dream to come true
getting her very own book published

Rain or shine snow or hurricane
W O L poets on Marple open mic
beer and poetry what a night!

Well done Linda and you too Nicola with your new book!

Comment is about Write Out Loud Stockport's open mic away day - in Marple (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

I thought this started off as a nice night time stroll, then boom, surprise. I enjoyed this very much. Thank You.

Comment is about INHALE/EXHALE (blog)

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Thanks Stu and Karen.

Stu - you disgust me ?

Comment is about Tai Chi (blog)

Original item by Laura Taylor

I like the way this pings and flips between the first and last who's. Good stuff. Life certainly can be like a game of pinball some days. Col.

Comment is about (blog)

Original item by brandon sproule

as seen through the eyes of the poet

Comment is about kuro silica (09/24/2017) (blog)

Original item by Zach Dafoe

excellent

Comment is about A Hunger (blog)

Original item by Connor Lannes

Harry,
Benny WAS guilty of crimes against entertainment.

Comment is about CROSSROADS MOTEL (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Thank you all very much for your kind words. I hadn't realised I'd written so much in answer to the questions - it seemed less in the email but more on here!

Graham, I thought a lot about knickers and panties and decided I liked them both equally. Just saying knickers and panties out loud makes me giggle. I know I should grow up!

Jonathan, I like the comparison. And I like British social dramas. I think Fish Tank fits into that category well enough.

Col.

Comment is about 'At the sink' by Colin Hill is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

John, John!
That huge piece of graffiti on the wall just outside of Euston station...`BENNY IS INNOCENT`... was it you?

Comment is about CROSSROADS MOTEL (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Oh! By the way, in V1 I would have said knickers not panties, we're British ?

Comment is about 'At the sink' by Colin Hill is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Colin, we had visitors last weekend and I missed this as it got buried quickly in the prolific blog section in just a couple of days. Thank goodness POTW has pulled it out for further appraisal.

The really clever bit in this is how it passes back and forth from narration into personal involvement.

As usual you've crept up on a subject and kidnapped it.

Great work

Comment is about 'At the sink' by Colin Hill is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

A sense of justice with this choice, as you have a pioneering quality that always brings an edge to your work - there must be peaks Col. Congratulations. I am so chuffed about the live reading - while you draw breath in Laugharne I'll be in Waterstones in Guildford fanning the flames of enthusiasm over a hot coffee!

All the very best to you. Ray

Comment is about 'At the sink' by Colin Hill is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

WE all learn some things the hard way. you won't have to wait for the next life Shaaklera,to be wise. you are wiser now.

Comment is about Still (blog)

Original item by Shaakiera Schroeder

congratulations Colin on POTW. no-one deserves it more than you, not only for the great work that you post, but also the way that you encourage others with your well thought out comments.
in your Q&A you talk about the WOL community. I like to think that that is what we are, but only because of the generosity of yourself and others like you.
thanks Kevin

Comment is about 'At the sink' by Colin Hill is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Thank you Mark for your exhaustive resume to fulfil my curiosity. That is certainly a massive expansion financially into stricken territories - the expression "by the balls" comes to mind re the American "investing" military hardware and personnel and its consequences. A most interesting and enlightening account thank you again. To think it only took a cyanide pill and one bullet to put paid to the man that started all that.
Ray

Comment is about JUDGEMENT DAY (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Brilliant !

Comment is about Scrumping Arundel (blog)

Original item by Andy N

Love this poem, love through the seasons and the realization of love.

Thank you for your comment on my poem Shadows. Very much appreciated.

Comment is about From Friendship to Love (V) (blog)

Original item by Andy N

It's great when people open up and tell you about themselves. I love all the detail.

Thank you for your comment on my poem Shadows, really appreciated.

Comment is about BUYING A CARPET (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Thank you for your message to me.

Comment is about Puerto Rico Puerto Rico (blog)

Original item by terry l shuff

Congratulations Colin,on poem of the week. You do write really good poetry and have been an encouragement to me.I appreciate your comments as I am sure many others do. ?

Comment is about 'At the sink' by Colin Hill is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Thanks Ray, Nat, Randy, Col, Stu and Patricia for comments and thanks to Desmond for liking
Ray this guy that I saw certainly had attitude, he didn't give a monkeys

Nat
I know what you mean about people watching. people are fascinating ad good material for writing. I would have love to have met some of the characters that Dickens mentions in his books.

Randy
You are right about no gaps to small , plus some people are just chancers anyway

Colin
I saw a programme a while back about some bikers in London who seemed to take it as a sport to ride wherever and whenever they want to abandoning any sense of danger , through red lights etc. As ray points out reminding us of the recent episode when a guy on a fixed wheel killed a woman crossing the road

Stu
I think that there is something voyeuristic about us all at times we just don't like to admit it

Patricia
now you are bringing back memories of not only choppers and they way they were ridden but also space hoppers.

That said folks I am a regular bike rider and have to confess to riding on the pavement at times as it is a lot safer than some of the roads as some motorists view cyclists as the enemy. I am always careful to watch out for pedestrians I might add and tend to give way to them. I do not condone in any way any sort of reckless behaviour.

once again thank you all for taking the time to read and comment. very much appreciated
Cheers
Martin

Comment is about cracked (blog)

Original item by Martin Elder

Love this one Col. There is as you say a kind of unspoken knowingness between the unseen figure that she is pointing at her and the daughter has no idea what went on the night before. Congratulations on POTW mate

Comment is about 'At the sink' by Colin Hill is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

I think you are right about my version being "dung dung dung dung dung". I have re-recorded the audio since my original. I thought I'd take advantage of a cold to replicate Lenny's low-pitched grumble.

Comment is about CROSSROADS MOTEL (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Really liked this poem. Haven't seen the film, but it brings Sillitoe's Saturday Night, Sunday Morning to mind. Well done Colin. Good stuff!
JH : )

Comment is about 'At the sink' by Colin Hill is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

from carpet bombing to carpet selling - I can see a thread here. Thoughtful as ever Ray and certainly suitable for Sunday morning. Have a peaceful day good sir. Col.

Comment is about BUYING A CARPET (blog)

Original item by ray pool

In fairness, the Marshall Aid Plan was intended to be the
basis for the regeneration of a cooperating Europe and
went to 16 countries including the UK. Russia feared its
intention was to exert and extend US influence/power
and refused to participate - using its own influence to
affect those lands within its grip to play ball with its
own policies. The aid was a mixture of grants and loans
and Germany was seen by the US as essential to the
ongoing political and industrial security of Europe. The
Organisation for European Economic Cooperation (OEEC)
and the European Coal and Steel Community (which
excluded Britain) were the forerunners of the EU, and
in 1953 Germany obtained a 50% debt reduction payable
over 30 years - not too onerous as its industrial rebirth
was going well. It's reported the UK had a direct loan
total of 4.6 billion USD, together with its Marshall aid in
post war Europe, and Ireland faced a debt repayment
obligation on its economy that was still running into the 1970s.
In short, the US considered its interests were best
served by bolstering the recovery of the countries most
affected by WW2 in Europe via pro-active financial
muscle amounting to over 140 billion USD in today's
values. How these were allocated and on what terms
had varying effects on the countries involved and most
in need.

Comment is about JUDGEMENT DAY (blog)

Original item by ray pool

very good. can really relate to this.

Comment is about At first I thought we'd meet again.. (blog)

Original item by chris stevenson

Stu, thanks for your most recent comment. I've changed the'poem' a bit, and I'm only hoping I've not spoiled what you liked.

It refuses to be 'categorised' as any 'type' of form. It just fights back. And so I let it be what it is. I'm not sure it's 'poetry' at all.

Comment is about Stuart Buck (poet profile)

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Cheers Martin - I like to do weird ideas - i'm pleased it was well received.

Natasha, thanks a lot. Well spotted - slight feeling of shoehorning but if read with that in mind I hope I got away with it. Be a fan always!!

Thanks Col. Yes, at it again as usual. Can you make that pounds though?

Nice to have you look in Stu. Stir in a little mad imagination and apply liberally! Hope you're doing ok..

Philip, you flatter me . Welcome to my wacky world where anything is impossible.

A nicely rounded comment David. That makes you a reprobate and cad sir. I think a nice piece of graffiti verse is just the ticket. I recall a trumpet player who ended up in a psychiatric unit scribbling music (a complete score of jazz all round his room. It was photo'd and transcribed by enthusiasts and was faultless. (What does that say about musicians?)

You're very kind Karen. I appreciate any comment from a scribe such as yourself.

Love all round. Ray

Comment is about MUSIC POEM (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Hazel,
I like the metaphorical possibilities of the `harbour` figuration in this. And also the reality of `letters` needing to `nestle up against each other` before they can make enough sense to embark on an understandable voyage.

I think I like most that it is a `natural` metaphor which - unlike so much of the strained `metaphor-icity` which is so fashionable these days - is so much more `traditional`.

For instance: the wideness of the sea and the`cogitative` closeness of the harbour are more universally (and also poetically) accessible to the human heart.

Comment is about Message in a bottle (blog)

Original item by Hazel ettridge

When anyone today holds forth about "Freedom"
What they mean is "Me, me, me-dom"!

Comment is about Hold on to your hat, Sir John! It's National Poetry Day (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Interesting, the author lives in the Bronx and the words apply to young people everywhere.
This poem does improve each time you read it.

Comment is about 'Unpopular Music' by Robert C Gaulke is Write Out Loud Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

wow. beautiful words and story. I love this so much, thank you!

Comment is about Mortal Curiousity (blog)

Original item by Duncan McKenzie Ross

Lovely poem. Was thinking of the man I love the whole time I was reading it. Beautiful words and expression of love.

Comment is about For Nick (blog)

Original item by iesha washington

I love how the poem flows and I think it has a great message.

Comment is about Fair Game (blog)

Original item by Mark Mr T Thompson

I love this poem, it's a great metaphor for depression and i know what that's like. It's just so beautifully written and honest. You're very talented.

Sarah x

Comment is about colorblind. (blog)

Original item by m.k.

Fantastic poem.

Comment is about Tai Chi (blog)

Original item by Laura Taylor

Fabulous. Love it.

Comment is about MUSIC POEM (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Beautifully lean, well chosen imagery.

Comment is about Leaving for Work in the Early Morning (blog)

Original item by A.M. Clarke

Beautiful. Love "deaths the bitterness". Great idea to use death as a verb. Love it when people play with language and this really works.

Comment is about Death poem (blog)

Original item by Lan

Thank you for your comments. Yes I had quite the time writing this. Did not want it to end.

Comment is about Ram It In! (blog)

Original item by Kealan Coady

A good point there Mark about regeneration - I didn't know about the Marshall Aid so thanks for that. I certainly have read the Scourge of the Swastika years ago - in which Lord Russell highlighted the death camps. Knights of Bushido i'll have to make a note of for the future. My wife and I just got back from Blenheim and are run through with Churchill and his exploits. I might consider a Churchill voice impression online soon - to invent a modern twist to current threats!

Ray

Comment is about JUDGEMENT DAY (blog)

Original item by ray pool

I love this,reminds me of my brother riding on his chopper,he did not give a flying shit about anything when he was on that bike,a beautiful act of defiance.
Gorgeous poem.

Comment is about cracked (blog)

Original item by Martin Elder

Changing lives is why we write...if only to help a little

Comment is about Still (blog)

Original item by Shaakiera Schroeder

@terry believe it or not that is by far my most favourite poem next to our greatest fear. Thank you for your kind words.

Comment is about Everything self; Beneath the surface (blog)

Original item by Shaakiera Schroeder

Heartfelt, strong poem.

Thank you for your comment on my poem 'Angel'.

Comment is about color (blog)

Original item by iesha washington

I put this poem on repeat read it again and again and again and....again

Comment is about MUSIC POEM (blog)

Original item by ray pool