I love the honesty in this, and the structure you used really drew me in as though I was there in your process and with your struggle. Thank you for sharing

Comment is about My Muse Is Dead (blog)

Original item by Miranda Fegan

Thanks appreciated the comments, so glad the audio works

Comment is about Meet me there (blog)

Original item by Phils Words

Thank you jon

Comment is about Power in the word # (blog)

Original item by Phils Words

I have to say Fred, I adore this piece. Your writing truly is a thing of beauty, and your talent is undeniable.

I specifically enjoy how alongside the air of romance flowing through this poem, there is also an undertone of suspense. It keeps the reader wanting more, wondering, as if it were the beginning of a novel or the like.

The repitition within the last few lines, when read aloud, sound almost as if one were falling into a dream-like state. Which to me is a wonderful thing, as it beautifully portrays the notion of finding a person's eyes so captivating that one finds themself "lost in" them.

Apologies for the long comment, I felt compelled to divulge my appreciation for your writing.
Your words are astounding.

Comment is about Talking Eyes (blog)

Original item by Rick Varden

Thank you Fred for yet another uplifting comment.

I too, have always found eyes to be a thing of mystery and wonder.

I feel that each person's aura, if you will, or personality to use more basic terms, shines through their eyes.

I believe that one can truly understand another just by looking into their eyes for even a moment.

I was debating whether or not to extend this piece of writing, but I felt that keeping it short just made sense.

I also felt that the descriptive nature of it allowed for individual interpretation. In the sense that, I'm sure any person who is to read these words, can think of a special person in their life to which they can relate them.

PS. I shall be sure to have a read of some of your writing, keep an eye out for my name amongst the comments :)

Comment is about Infatuation (blog)

Original item by Kayleigh Denton

Great this, I was waiting for more but the poem says a lot as it is. It’s all so true, I actually seem to have a knack for ‘reading eyes’. Eyes can show pain, love, sadness, depression, interest and much much more Kayleigh. Well done and thank you for your descriptive yet sensitive work.
Fred
Ps try and check out ‘talking eyes’ on my blog’

Comment is about Infatuation (blog)

Original item by Kayleigh Denton

Thanks Jemima for your nice complement.

Comment is about My Pain (blog)

Original item by Saikia Surjya

Hi Keith, Ray, Colin and Jon
Thank you all for your posts and I can advise you of my intent to write a massive thriller about containment, strangers and with no point of reference- a bit like my local- Tommy. ;- )

Comment is about ray pool (poet profile)

Original item by ray pool

Hi Keith, Ray, Colin and Jon
Thank you all for your posts and I can advise you of my intent to write a massive thriller about containment, strangers and with no point of reference- a bit like my local- Tommy. ;- )

Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)

Original item by keith jeffries

Hi Keith, Ray, Colin and Jon
Thank you all for your posts and I can advise you of my intent to write a massive thriller about containment, strangers and with no point of reference- a bit like my local- Tommy. ;- )

Comment is about Jon Darby (poet profile)

Original item by Jon Darby

Hi Keith, Ray, Colin and Jon
Thank you all for your posts and I can advise you of my intent to write a massive thriller about containment, strangers and with no point of reference- a bit like my local- Tommy. ;- )

Comment is about Excuse my hand (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

Thank you for commenting on my Untitled poem. I'm really glad you enjoyed it ?

Comment is about Sidra Shahid (poet profile)

Original item by Sidra Shahid

Saikia this poem is so beautiful.Thank you.Jemima.

Comment is about My Pain (blog)

Original item by Saikia Surjya

Love this.
Is it Mary Berry?
Queen of baking, smiling, wearing interesting tops.

Hannah

Comment is about QUEEN IN THE KITCHEN (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Beautiful poetry, stunning, so rich in detail.
I could see the photos of the mum and dad, smell the long ago perfumes.
The history of a family in a piece of furniture.
So deserving of POTW.

Hannah

Comment is about 'The Dresser' by Jon Darby is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

mad! but I love it.Thank you.Jemima.

Comment is about Ridiculous Rhymes (blog)

Original item by Jennifer Malden

Dude, that was lovely. I have to admit I haven't read much of your work but I will be doing, going forward. Theres so much on this site and I have so very little time. I have 'go-to' poets that I tend to go straight to. I really liked this poem, so I'll add you to my favorites and read some more.
I have to admit my own childhood was nothing like that, and I didn't really 'do' school, but I was very happy. I think i'd like to try and write about it soon.
Thanks. Beno.

Comment is about A Fire Screen for Learning (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

Wow!! The last verse hit me right in the feels,
Beautiful!
Best regards,
Sidra

Comment is about Untitled (blog)

Original item by Miranda Fegan

Beautiful ?

Comment is about The Theif, The Craftsman, The Artist, The Liar. (blog)

Original item by Nick

Dont fart at the cat!! ?
Loved it

Comment is about Ridiculous Rhymes (blog)

Original item by Jennifer Malden

Hi Cynthia. So kind of you to comment on my photos ! The coloured one is the old git and the other is the young suavo aged 20. Hard to spot the difference I know! I thought it was moody and in fact an early selfie taken with a self timer(the predecessor of the umbilical version). Bless yer.

Ray

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Hello. I am trying to contact the Dead Good Poets' Society to book a slot at their regular Open Mic for 2018.
My first full collection, Melted Cheese on the Cosmic Pizza, has just been published by Erbacce Press . Can anyone help?
Kind regards, Andrew Button

Review is about Dead Good Poets' Society on 3 Jan 2018 (event)

Great title Ray and fabulous poem! Love the lines,' here comes Mary like fairy dust, gentle queen of cake and crust'.
Also,the thought of said Mary twain in two like a baked item is a deliciously wicked thought.

Comment is about QUEEN IN THE KITCHEN (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Congratulations on POTW Jon and thanks for taking the time to respond to the Q&A's, a feature which many of us look forward to reading each week. It doesn't take much time and effort for members to acknowledge and reciprocate the likes, comments and accolades left for them so it is good to see you have broken the silence of the previous two weeks!

And this is such a good poem, one which I very much enjoyed reading earlier in the week. All the best. Colin.

Comment is about 'The Dresser' by Jon Darby is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Quite brilliant! Well done. It’s so true a kiss, show of affection can actually change a life.

Comment is about Kisses (blog)

Original item by Nicola Byrnes

Sheer brilliance! Thank you Keith.

Comment is about November (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

Cheers Keith

Comment is about The Blue World below (blog)

Original item by Rick Varden

You can find more of my poetry on line including performance videos simply by searching on DAVID SUBACCHI.

Comment is about ANOLINI (blog)

Original item by David Subacchi

Kissing is the most wonderful of things it can be celebrated in 1 million different ways as promises as dreams come true as the passion romance as climaxes of your llove to one another and I am so certain that you know them all Great write

Comment is about Kisses (blog)

Original item by Nicola Byrnes

Fred,beautifully and highly descriptive indeed. Thank you. Keith

Comment is about The Blue World below (blog)

Original item by Rick Varden

Cheers guys, well we all use them, sometimes with some effect other times not. At the end of the day I’m over the moon! Ha ha

Comment is about Anecdotal Attributes (blog)

Original item by Rick Varden

A beautiful sentiment said in an ugly way!

Comment is about Go For It (blog)

Original item by Lewis O'Brien

Truly beautiful full of love and adoration for mum and dad i sense the comfort you get from those treasured memories stored and hidden away deep in your thoughts and then revealed to us your readers glimpsing into your intimate memories love this poem so touching loved the line...
Its womb like hold.
Keep on reminiscing x
Christine x

Comment is about 'The Dresser' by Jon Darby is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

I do not as of yet. I'll let you know if I think of one that I feel is fitting. Thank you for your lovely comment.

Comment is about Kayleigh Denton (poet profile)

Original item by Kayleigh Denton

Thank you so much Fred. Knowing that my words are being understood, and that people can relate to them, means a lot to me!

Comment is about Contemplation (blog)

Original item by Kayleigh Denton

Well deserved POTW Jon. ?
Love the way your poem draws you in with the dresser and then takes you on a journey through your childhood.
Well done!
Paul

Comment is about 'The Dresser' by Jon Darby is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Cynthia, you were right. I got it wrong. I appreciate all comments and corrections. I am grateful that you take time to review my work. With gratitude. Keith (Najd)

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

The connection between human life, its hope and belief,
and harsh reality is poignantly portrayed in these short
lines. This has many forms and the shoes here have
a comforting "history" with the items placed with the
departed across the borders of faith and country.

Comment is about Favourite Shoes (blog)

Original item by Albert Van Skywalker

Jon, Congratulations on Poem of the Week. Brilliant. Keith

Comment is about The Dresser (blog)

Original item by Jon Darby

"Good will" - an expression that describes the obvious way
of relating to our fellows and the best way of preventing
conflict in all its forms. We should all be working towards
its priority in our dealings with each other.

Comment is about If It Started This Christmas (blog)

Original item by Dave Dunn

I'm so pleased you got this POTW Jon especially being that you're so receptive and open minded on here. This poem must have hit a nerve with lots of us. It is very hard to separate ourselves from treasured furniture at the end of a life, and to watch especially as men in vans tacitly cart them off. Heartbreaking stuff.

Ray

Comment is about 'The Dresser' by Jon Darby is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Looking good Andy - - - please save me a copy

Comment is about Enemy of the Wall (blog)

Original item by Andy N

Hi Cynthia,

I just re-read this, and have corrected my mistakes!

Some of the lines didn't have 12 syllables.

Rich.

Comment is about Society (blog)

Original item by Rich

Brilliantly suggestive in so few words. The epitome of poetry, simultaneously including and opening the reader's mind and emotions.

Comment is about 'A Room Alone' by A.M.Clarke is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Probing and honest. The detail is delightful. It is amazing how a single piece of furniture can encapsulate so much, but it truly can.

Comment is about 'The Dresser' by Jon Darby is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Jeez Louise, that is one sexy photo in black and white. And also one fine picture in colour, still - commanding!

Comment is about ray pool (poet profile)

Original item by ray pool

Very atmospheric with splendid imagery. It deserves multiple readings.

I can't be sure whether you like or dislike suggestions or corrections. But, I'll risk it, just because it's so good. And it's 'page poetry'. I think you want 'mantle', a 'covering', as opposed to a 'mantel' over a fireplace. But I could be wrong. It's the closeness of 'blanket' that made me feel you might just have chosen the wrong spelling. I've tried to put both ideas into your particular line and also the general content.

If I'm wrong, be cross with me by all means, and set me straight.

Comment is about The Najd (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

This is so powerful I just can’t say anymore, choked. Thank you

Comment is about A Picture of You (blog)

Original item by Pauliegreg

Very clever Fred. Made me smile.

Comment is about Anecdotal Attributes (blog)

Original item by Rick Varden

well hello you back! Thanks for that Chris. I'm more SW than mid - Carmarthen way.

Comment is about Passing Fashions (blog)

Original item by Chris Armstrong