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lisa donohoe

Fri 1st Feb 2019 23:34

Speechless..
I have not heard this song since my dad passed away, he played it during many debates between him and his friends (lol)
What a pleasure to have heard it once again ?

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lisa donohoe

Fri 1st Feb 2019 23:28

Jon your work always inspires me to keep being my self, what a heartwarming piece. Amazing job as always well done ?

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lisa donohoe

Fri 1st Feb 2019 23:18

Wowwww...
This is absolutely incredible. Every word
Every verse.
Brilliant peter, well done

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lisa donohoe

Fri 1st Feb 2019 23:13

What a beautiful song, it brang a tear to my eye after 15 seconds.
So much meaning 'yet so much sorrow. Yet so much hope..Thank you for your kind words john ?
Kindness is not found as easily as it once was many moons ago, its a treasure that should never be locked away.

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lisa donohoe

Fri 1st Feb 2019 23:06

Reading this has simply taking my breath away, So truthful and eye opening. Bravo ?

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John Marks

Fri 1st Feb 2019 23:06

Thank you Lisa. You are very kind. Lovingkindness - the most under-rated of the virtues. Jacob gave me the song that accompanies the poem. It is beautiful. Have a listen. John

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lisa donohoe

Fri 1st Feb 2019 23:04

I could read your work all day vautaw, it never fails to hit one's soul. And that's were its always best to feel. Thank you for your kind words and thank you for writing so much that resonants with many im sure, but definitely myself. x

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lisa donohoe

Fri 1st Feb 2019 22:57

This is beautiful, ?
Great job. Im sure the man himself would have extraordinary things to say about this.
You are very talented.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Fri 1st Feb 2019 22:57

Thanks so much for your words of encouragement and support Lisa! My muse has been so active lately. The words pour out faster than I can assemble them which keeps impostor syndrome alive and well. Sharing helps, so do beautiful souls like you. ?

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Fri 1st Feb 2019 22:51

Welcome back Graham. Without even posting anything you have increased Wol's quality.

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John Marks

Fri 1st Feb 2019 22:50

'Fraid not Martin. My spatial ability is limited - to say the least - Lowry's matchstick men seem difficult to me! John

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lisa donohoe

Fri 1st Feb 2019 22:36

The pain in your word's has touched my soul, the love and worrie you have is unconditional. Stay strong, one can only escape their own demon's , but having someone who loves them waiting when they make that decision gives them hope to keep going. This was truly beautiful x

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Fri 1st Feb 2019 22:23

It is both Farawla, and yes, a very scary reality. ?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Fri 1st Feb 2019 22:21

"Show them poetry." I know that would work for me! How lovely Po, I can't wait to read your poems. Yes, I would be completely lost without the power of prayer! ?

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Stu Buck

Fri 1st Feb 2019 21:57

absolutely love crisp crunching steps martin. a real phrase you can sense. the rest is excellent too of course but for me that made me smile

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John Marks

Fri 1st Feb 2019 21:37

Thank you Jon. That is kind. John

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Greg Freeman

Fri 1st Feb 2019 21:31

Good to see you back, Graham!

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Jon Stainsby

Fri 1st Feb 2019 21:25

Yes, that's the one. Thanks, Po.

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Jon Stainsby

Fri 1st Feb 2019 21:22

I will just say I love all your work, John.

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John Marks

Fri 1st Feb 2019 21:19

3-lines and this response! Blimey! I knew I were doin summat wrong!

Seriously, though, thank you to all the contributors to WOL for all the support you've given me since 2010 and, most of all, for all the beautiful poems that I've been privileged to read.

“We make out of the quarrel with others, rhetoric, but of the quarrel with ourselves, poetry.” — William Butler Yeats, from PER AMICA SILENTIA LUNAE.

John

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Jon Stainsby

Fri 1st Feb 2019 21:18

? Thanks, Dolly

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Jon Stainsby

Fri 1st Feb 2019 21:18

Thank you so much, Dolly.

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<Deleted User> (21291)

Fri 1st Feb 2019 21:17

Hope and trust God....no one is cursed, just few tests of life we have to pass anyway?

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<Deleted User> (21291)

Fri 1st Feb 2019 21:16

This is so beautiful...nature sings a perfect lullaby.....?

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Stu Buck

Fri 1st Feb 2019 21:03

thanks very much martin. i had hoped to channel a bit of basho as i said below, i find haiku can become a bit self indulgent (i am as guilty as any of this) and wanted to write something slight and of a moment as he did.

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Jon Stainsby

Fri 1st Feb 2019 20:54

Great poem

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<Deleted User> (21406)

Fri 1st Feb 2019 20:37

What could be the solution? How could the person be helped? Is this just poetry or a warning?
Very scary write up...?

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Martin Elder

Fri 1st Feb 2019 19:42

Very clever John. There are some many intriguing tales about Bowie. I think the thing I liked most about him was that he was ever changing.
Love the poem


also an intriguing painting you have posted here is it one of yours ?

Nice one

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Martin Elder

Fri 1st Feb 2019 19:34

Wonderful Linda. Is this new or is it something soon to be published.
Either way a lovely piece

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Martin Elder

Fri 1st Feb 2019 19:32

This would appear to be someone who is in a time warp and completely happy with it, despite all others changing around her. I love the fact that does not seem to be an judgement in this.
Nice one Ray

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 1st Feb 2019 19:31

These are well measured words Peter. Words well said

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Martin Elder

Fri 1st Feb 2019 19:30

This seems to be the genuine article with what would seem to have a real sense of the far east.
Nice one Stu

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Martin Elder

Fri 1st Feb 2019 19:28

You have said so much with so few words. beautifully written. I concur completely with your tips on open mic's
Nice one David
I look forward to more

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Peter Taylor

Fri 1st Feb 2019 19:20

I appreciate that I am not well known in WOL but I will back this comment up with a proper application/CV which will give you chapter and verse as to my credentials to be part of a moderator team.

Hitherto I have enjoyed immensely contributing to WOL and reading certainly not all but a fair number of the blogs that flow through the system adorned (generally) by respectful commentary throughout their passage. I have also considered it appropriate to make a monthly donation as an expression of my enjoyment and thanks for the intelligent and friendly words of support from many, many good poets out there reading.

WOL deserves better treatment than has been inflicted on it recently by a minority. To stage on our carefully constructed and well loved platform the kind of material that has appeared over this short period (relative to its longevity) is to slap the face of every other person who gives his or her time to write, to read, to manage and thereby daily re-create the fine thing that WOL is and should be. A line must be drawn now to prevent terminal damage to this wonderful organisation. There is no way that personal grievances can be handled as they have been recently. We must all know deep down inside that this is not and cannot be the way.

Peter T

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<Deleted User> (21422)

Fri 1st Feb 2019 19:01

Nice to meet you David...wonderful comment..."here is probably there". I loved National Lottery-spot on!?

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Jason Bayliss

Fri 1st Feb 2019 18:53

A genuine and heartfelt thanks to you all.

J

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kJ Walker

Fri 1st Feb 2019 18:23

I'll second you.(po)

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raypool

Fri 1st Feb 2019 17:45

The spirit of economy is such a worthwhile process as you say David. We can all hold this up to the light and see clearly. Congratulations too.

Ray

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Stu Buck

Fri 1st Feb 2019 17:12

this is very warm despite the subject matter and i enjoyed it a lot

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Stu Buck

Fri 1st Feb 2019 16:22

thoroughly embarrassing to watch this develop over the last few days. grown men. i ask you! poetry is a bridge builder between the worlds of people who may never meet but share a love for words and a need to express themselves. to have the site rendered almost unusable due to a handbags match has been a great shame. thats my only words on the 'matter'.

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John Marks

Fri 1st Feb 2019 16:20

Thanks Lisa. A drama-free day is grand by me. All good wishes. John

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lisa donohoe

Fri 1st Feb 2019 15:52

Round of applause , (extreme clapping )
May it sink in and bring order and possibly a new start..
What a beautiful choice of words.. Well done

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Foy Timms

Fri 1st Feb 2019 15:47

Thought provoking work, beautiful.
Such a wonderful title too.

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Fri 1st Feb 2019 15:18

Brother Don and big brother Sal......come to a common ground, drop your swords.
Such a wisdom spread in this poem.

Peace....and no more war...please!!!

We want you back Big Sal!!!l

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 1st Feb 2019 15:12

Much sense in these lines. Best to be open to compromise and
explanation in any conflict of opinions and avoid the egregious extremes in responses that can occur. Onward and upward!

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DESMOND CHILDS

Fri 1st Feb 2019 14:48

Bit late but! Happy new year robin, you too David. Great inspirational haika.

All the best des

Comment is about 'Haiku: Robin at New Year' by David Redfield is Poem of the Week (article)

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lisa donohoe

Fri 1st Feb 2019 13:45

If you add up each poem that was posted by both parties , its clear to see who's really at fault..
This all started over silly comment's that lead to a hudge negative war, its unfair to put all of the blame on big sal. If I am correct their was two poems directed at his site in a negative way before he responded back. Two wrongs do not make a right.
It would be so awful to put WOL on hold and punish the rest of the amazing aspiring poet's because of other people's lack of respect..
Today alone there was another poem placed on this site, its clear to see who is really at fault here.
The little boy who cried wolf rings a bell..
I hope this mess can be sorted out ASAP, this site has turned into a mini version of Facebook with so much drama.
I hope we can all restore it back to how and what it was originally designed for.
To express our poetic selfs once more with out the fear of crazy ' childish drama.. I stand by big sal 100%, he stood up to bullys in my eyes, i also
find you all super talented. Have a pleasant drama free day everyone?

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raypool

Fri 1st Feb 2019 13:23

Julian and Greg : I think it is good that a grip has been made on the problems you describe, for one reason the minority are suffering from a lack of transparency; now at least the situation has been revealed and drawn into focus. Obviously posting tit for tat grievances come nowhere the ethos of poetry, in fact destroys the fabric of its inspiration.. I certainly feel restrained, but are trying to ignore it. While I am posting, I feel it would be a massive loss to lose the site as it stands, and would implore those on the treadmill to show a bit of consideration. I have always valued the importance of intelligent comments and tried to do my bit.
At present I fear that the very act of moderation would be like invading a wasps nest.

My good friend David Moore tried his best to raise the bar, even being banned for a time, making a wonderful contribution by the expressing of genuine life experiences which are unpalatable to many. I am speaking on his behalf I'm sure when I make this comment.

I entirely understand what you say, but could not let it pass without my feelings being known.

With respect, Ray

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Dragan Bozilov

Fri 1st Feb 2019 13:17

Big Sal - Thanks! I will check it out that 2Pac song..never heard it before ? greets

Vautaw - Thank you!

poemagraphic - Thx! 24 btw ?

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raypool

Fri 1st Feb 2019 13:08

Good to see you on WOL Carla and to experience your range of activities. Sadly we are having some adverse comments at present in general, but we must soldier on and rise above that. Hold hands and contact the living!

Might see you soon!

Ray

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