Hey You

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Hey you
once so full of love
you’re the only one
I’ve been thinking of

Liquid smoky
pale blue eyes
black hair like silk
once by my side

My heart’s delight
on your tattooed shoulder
lay my head tonight
but you keep getting colder

Once touched my soul
a burning underscore
everything you said
fading into nevermore

And what sticks in my mind
and what I hope you’ll know
entangled as we are now
I'll always hope for more

Hey you
missing you so bad
Why’d you have to go
and make me so sad


◄ Dropped to Earth

Clinging Sunsets ►


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Trixie Gore

Sun 22nd Mar 2020 06:21

Thank you for your insight, John. I really like that you picked up on that!

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John Marks

Tue 3rd Mar 2020 08:53

I like the tone - feisty and questioning rather than accusatory and self-pitying. Well-penned.

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