To Whom It May Concern

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To Whom It May Concern,

Please ensure it rains on Sunday morning

For the rain washes away the shame

Of the city streets,

Neutralises the urine,

Disperses the vomit

And makes us clean again.


Pure and untainted rain

The antithesis of the city

Transparent and true

Falling without discrimination

On the people and ground below.


Sunday morning needs you, rain.

The city begs to be cleansed.

The tarmac yearns to glisten with moisture from above,

Not from a flacid, drunken penis.



©Katy Stewart March 2010


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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 10th Apr 2010 21:02

For some of us, this just hurts to read, but I personally am glad to see you grab this social issue and treat it with realism.

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kealan coady

Fri 9th Apr 2010 19:53

Good theme and language here but it would take more than rain to wash the scum off the streets

<Deleted User> (8059)

Fri 9th Apr 2010 19:49

Indeed - maybe that is one for "To Whom it May Concern 2" ! x

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Tommy Carroll

Fri 9th Apr 2010 17:08

haha...nor a 'spread-legged bare arse and squirting vagina.'

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