most utopian of independencies

 

freedom in the true sense of the word

is never truly free

if you want the real thing

then you may have to pay the highest prices you have ever paid

 

it is a wild child without a care in the world of its own

a stitched to the skin all in one suit of original liberty

a key to the universe of everyone's ultimate desire

an endless ride on the wind

 

eel slippery, uncatchable as a shadow

unwilling to be owned willo'the wisp

a perfect get-away from it all escape-clause

a disentanglement from woven into our lives materialism

an unlocking of modernisms shackles

a flash in a dreamers pan

 

to take on the search for it

that elusive jackpot

is it worth the trouble,

or are the odds of finding it stacked against us?

 

the answer lies I think

in the strength of everyone's personal determination.  

◄ of a dad who never was

beneath a heavy snow delivering sky ►

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Rose Casserley

Sun 22nd Sep 2019 16:40

no, it's not dangerous Don, in fact, it might come in very handy to me next time I choose my lottery numbers, if I ever put them on that is 😊


Keith, what can I say other than the same I and lots of other folk would say to people who inspire them onwards with helpful comments and likes, such as your good self, Don, Chrystel ( who I agree with 100% Des, Lisa, Do.Rothy, and Adam....


THANK YOU! THANK YOU!


Rose 💋

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Chrystel Roberts

Sun 22nd Sep 2019 07:47

Freedom comes with a price tag. Great poem, Rose

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keith jeffries

Sat 21st Sep 2019 13:02

Rose,

Fabulous! "or are the odds stacked against us". This poem delves into the heart of freedom. You have excelled yourself Rose. A poem worthy of real acclaim
Thank you

Keith

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Don Matthews

Sat 21st Sep 2019 12:57

So good Rose....

I've never dealt with a psychic before. Is it dangerous?.....

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Rose Casserley

Sat 21st Sep 2019 12:39

put my pre-emptive and thankful quick reaction down to my psychic powers Adam 😊

but yes, weird indeed!
thanks again







Rose 💋

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Adam Rabinowitz

Sat 21st Sep 2019 12:36

How did you reply before I even clicked send.. Weird....

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Adam Rabinowitz

Sat 21st Sep 2019 12:35

There are so many wonderful phrases and lines in this, Rose. I love
eel-slippery
stitched to the skin

But mostly I just love the poetic capture of "Nothing ventured, nothing gained"

A great poem to see first at 4:35 a.m. sleepless journey to the keyboard.

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Rose Casserley

Sat 21st Sep 2019 12:35

many thank's Adam.





kind regards.





Rose 💋

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