Naked Unconditional Love

The air was heavy with desire as his hand touched her naked breast

His mouth found her erect nipple and his tongue felt her areolaย 

He sucked hard and a burst of emotion shot through her body

She held him close, encouraging him to continue

She loved him more than anybody or anything on earth

When it was over he fell into a deep satisfied sleep

She slept too, knowing that he would need it again in two hours


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Jason Bayliss

Sat 21st Sep 2019 14:10

Made me laugh, even though I knew what was coming. It's actually a beautiful poem about true unconditional love. Still made me smile though. Couldn't help thinking, "Bitty?"๐Ÿ˜‚

(For our non-British counterparts, if you're curious, just type Little Britain bitty, into YouTube.๐Ÿ˜‚. Still makes me cringe!)

J. x

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Becky Who

Sat 21st Sep 2019 14:00

If I told you my experiences it wouldn't make for a very funny poem. If you want a parallel experience try shutting a very sensitive part of the anatomy in a door, that should do it. But everyone's different and I wouldn't want to put future mums off breast feeding...๐Ÿ˜•

And I still like your take on it.

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Brian Maryon

Fri 20th Sep 2019 22:18

Ah Becky, yes I really should have consulted someone with first hand experience. Thank you.

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Becky Who

Fri 20th Sep 2019 21:59

I like it. Although you missed "he latched on like an iron clamp".

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 18th Sep 2019 23:08

Of course Brian. Breast is Best (NCT)

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Brian Maryon

Wed 18th Sep 2019 15:47

About a mother and baby in case anyone missed it.

Thanks all for your interest.

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keith jeffries

Wed 18th Sep 2019 13:05

Gripping stuff Brian.

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