It was a day in the summer 

When you came up to me

Your eyes were like a chocolate 

So sweet


I was sipping on your words

Getting drunk on your charm

You enchanted me with your 

delicious smile


Velvety smooth

Galaxy Milky Way

You took me on a ride

to chocolate heaven


Chocolate chocolate chocolate

Maltesers M&M’s

I am enslaved to this 

exquisite taste


It was a day in the summer

When you came up to me

You turned my world upside down

when you coloured it chocolatey



◄ Trust

Future ►


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Wed 21st Aug 2019 10:46

Thank you Raj. Being able to share thoughts on this site feels very freeing. Thank you for reading and your response.

Many thanks as well to Jason, Do.RoThY and blackrose for liking.


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Raj Ferds

Tue 20th Aug 2019 07:05

I love the simplicity of this piece Julia -- seems to mirror a real-life emotion that resonates within you.

It certainly echoes one simple truth -- attraction can be ever so addictive. Thank you for sharing it here.


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