The Lazarus Tears

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The night brings rain

on a curtain of cool air

 

it falls like secret promises

that will never be kept

 

our house stands proud in the deluge

the tracks now not so easily traced  

 

morning Sun will raise up the dew

like Lazarus tears

 

and the day so resplendently renewed

resurrects the remnants of all our fears

 

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Peter Taylor

Sat 17th Aug 2019 06:16

Hello David – sorry to have picked up on this late in the day.

I enjoyed this very much – lots coming out of a few words and sentences; very much your brand.

All best.

Peter T

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Wolfgar Miere

Sun 11th Aug 2019 09:05

Thank you for the likes and flowers folks.

David.

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Wolfgar Miere

Sat 10th Aug 2019 00:50

Thank you Ray and Cynthia,

You have both been extremely kind with your comments and I value them as they are demonstrably thoughtful.

I sat up through the night last night, I was out in the landscape in a beautifully isolated area. There was an expectation of a storm and the air was still and heavy...I lay on a dry stone wall watching the clouds gather overhead..it was a lovely thing to behold, to watch nature mustering her forces...

Somehow this came out of that, it was a beautiful night and the morning crowned it off with the most serene Sun skating across the sky.

Thank you both so much.

David.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 9th Aug 2019 20:36

The intent formed, and the words found and developed, by a great thinker and a master craftsman. IMO, a really fine work.

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raypool

Fri 9th Aug 2019 11:57

Hi David; refreshing but with a sense of foreboding - as uncontrollable as the weather itself which has its own agenda. Better perhaps to have a deluge and a catharsis...

Ray

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